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Array ( [sid] => 21519 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Sad wings of destiny [time] => 2003-08-06 02:45:00 [hometext] => My very first poem...written in class [bodytext] => At first I thought I was lost
After being for years dust
But my feelings were to betray me
Shiny words you came to tell me

Months have passed and I was high
Jealous were the eagles when they saw me fly
Your come in my life made wings grow
Love in the air was to make the moon blow

Fool I was, my senses were out
You were to leave, I had no doubt
Time, I have been fooled by so many
These weren't but sad wings of destiny
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Sad wings of destiny

Contributed by LaMaGrA on Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 02:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

At first I thought I was lost
After being for years dust
But my feelings were to betray me
Shiny words you came to tell me

Months have passed and I was high
Jealous were the eagles when they saw me fly
Your come in my life made wings grow
Love in the air was to make the moon blow

Fool I was, my senses were out
You were to leave, I had no doubt
Time, I have been fooled by so many
These weren't but sad wings of destiny

Copyright © LaMaGrA ... [ 2003-08-06 02:45:00]
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Re: Sad wings of destiny (User Rating: 1 )
by juliette on Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 02:52:12 AM AEST
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Great first write! I love the line "Jealous were the eagles when they saw me fly". I feel you......... And if this is your first write, befriend the pen because you really have such potential. Thanks for sharing!
juliette

Re: Sad wings of destiny (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 03:47:06 AM AEST
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what a beautiful start...........such wonderful potential..........good job!!!

Re: Sad wings of destiny (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 06:52:03 AM AEST
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good read.. venkat

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