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Array ( [sid] => 21517 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Origin of the elders [time] => 2003-08-06 01:25:00 [hometext] => A myth about how bats were created... [bodytext] => The ground of the forest hid something under
A huge heart that had the sound of thunder
Humans, animals, trees and spirits were scared
From that giant that straight at their souls stared

A curious fool mouse seeked daring danger
Forgetting he was to that heart a stranger
He bit in rage to discover a taste
A taste that left him behind years of waste

That creature was doomed to live in darkness
Having wings grown, becoming symbol of sadness
The mouse became a bat that was cursed forever
"Would I see the Sun again?", it cried. No..never... [comments] => 3 [counter] => 189 [topic] => 42 [informant] => LaMaGrA [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => mythology )

Origin of the elders

Contributed by LaMaGrA on Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 01:25:00 AM in AEST
Topic: mythology

The ground of the forest hid something under
A huge heart that had the sound of thunder
Humans, animals, trees and spirits were scared
From that giant that straight at their souls stared

A curious fool mouse seeked daring danger
Forgetting he was to that heart a stranger
He bit in rage to discover a taste
A taste that left him behind years of waste

That creature was doomed to live in darkness
Having wings grown, becoming symbol of sadness
The mouse became a bat that was cursed forever
"Would I see the Sun again?", it cried. No..never...

Copyright © LaMaGrA ... [ 2003-08-06 01:25:00]
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Re: Origin of the elders (User Rating: 1 )
by sicknivesevered on Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 01:37:10 AM AEST
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Haha, well isn't that screwed up. Interesting write.

Re: Origin of the elders (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 03:41:44 AM AEST
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"a huge heart".......... i like that line......

Re: Origin of the elders (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 11:01:19 AM AEST
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i love bats, and i love this poem:) warm welcome to ypdc too, hugs n' love nessa

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