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Array ( [sid] => 21509 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => My Madness [time] => 2003-08-05 20:05:00 [hometext] => I can feel myself slowly going insane, and it's scary. [bodytext] => My God,
My head's so wrong,
I'm trapped inside my mind.
Paradoxes surround me,
I'm in a room with fireflies driving me mad.
I can't see where I'm going next.
The fireflies aren't in a room,
They're here,
Here inside my head,
Driving me crazy, insane,
Creating and destroying questions that have no answers,
Why won't they leave me alone?
My head needs a rest,
My soul needs a death,
I'm tired of hitting myself,
Tired of being this crazy whore that no one wants.
My madness,
My sanity,
My sanctuary doesn't exist.
Who can take me out of my head?
Does a person who can do that exist?
I'm lost inside here,
So if you catch me when I'm not acting for you,
And you see that I'm not like the rest of them,
Don't judge me,
Forget what you see,
Like everyone else has done in the past and future,
And just carrying acting like you always do,
Oblivious.
No one can help me,
No one can get me out,
My madness.
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My Madness

Contributed by M on Tuesday, 5th August 2003 @ 08:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

My God,
My head's so wrong,
I'm trapped inside my mind.
Paradoxes surround me,
I'm in a room with fireflies driving me mad.
I can't see where I'm going next.
The fireflies aren't in a room,
They're here,
Here inside my head,
Driving me crazy, insane,
Creating and destroying questions that have no answers,
Why won't they leave me alone?
My head needs a rest,
My soul needs a death,
I'm tired of hitting myself,
Tired of being this crazy whore that no one wants.
My madness,
My sanity,
My sanctuary doesn't exist.
Who can take me out of my head?
Does a person who can do that exist?
I'm lost inside here,
So if you catch me when I'm not acting for you,
And you see that I'm not like the rest of them,
Don't judge me,
Forget what you see,
Like everyone else has done in the past and future,
And just carrying acting like you always do,
Oblivious.
No one can help me,
No one can get me out,
My madness.

Copyright © M ... [ 2003-08-05 20:05:00]
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Re: My Madness (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Tuesday, 5th August 2003 @ 09:40:14 PM AEST
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you CAN feel it can't you.........such a slow death.........i lie the line about being tired....

Re: My Madness (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 01:02:28 AM AEST
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I liked this a lot and I can relate to it oh so much. I don't get how your a 'crazy whore' however. Keep on writing and live for the days when the sun is shining...

Praying for better days,
Bobo (Joel)

Re: My Madness (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 10:36:13 AM AEST
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awww, reaching in there and giving you a big hug emily, much love to you, nessa x

Re: My Madness (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 02:43:07 PM AEST
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aww em...i want to help you get out, i really do, i'm always here alright? i'm just a phone call or bus ride away...i love you very much...xxx

Re: My Madness (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 08:30:05 PM AEST
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I love the line about not acting... this really touched me, I wish I could do something to help... so I'll just say that I sincerely hope you find a way out of what you're feeling. Best wishes,

~ Moonlit

Re: My Madness (User Rating: 1 )
by afraid_of_fear on Saturday, 9th August 2003 @ 12:47:21 PM AEST
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M honey, you know that i'm only a phone call away too, wherever i am, and i never forget you. Please, just keep holding on, hold on to whatever it is that's strong enough to keep you here. You're a beautiful, much loved person. Keep fighting hun.
Love forever and always, i'm here for you, charlotte x_x_x

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