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Array ( [sid] => 21450 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => undeserving [time] => 2003-08-04 09:05:00 [hometext] => i dont deserve your comments, spend your time commenting on those that have actually had a hard life, sometimes, just the fact that they are noticed can help. [bodytext] => I look around,
And all I see is others pain.
Everyone else goes through so much
More then I ever did,
More then I ever will.
I wish that I could take away their hurt,
That I could help them in some way,
But the truth is,
I'm useless.
I can’t help them,
No matter how much I try-

I have victimized myself,
And convinced so many people,
That I am the troubled one,
Sure I have had my issues,
But who really has a trouble free life.
What I have gone through is trivial.
And it has no real significance-

I realize now why I haven’t been able,
To take away my own life,
I don’t deserve death,
I haven’t earned it.
I need to get my life back in perspective.
And I need to try harder to help those,
Those who have actually suffered. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 184 [topic] => 32 [informant] => hardcoreputa [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

undeserving

Contributed by hardcoreputa on Monday, 4th August 2003 @ 09:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

I look around,
And all I see is others pain.
Everyone else goes through so much
More then I ever did,
More then I ever will.
I wish that I could take away their hurt,
That I could help them in some way,
But the truth is,
I'm useless.
I can’t help them,
No matter how much I try-

I have victimized myself,
And convinced so many people,
That I am the troubled one,
Sure I have had my issues,
But who really has a trouble free life.
What I have gone through is trivial.
And it has no real significance-

I realize now why I haven’t been able,
To take away my own life,
I don’t deserve death,
I haven’t earned it.
I need to get my life back in perspective.
And I need to try harder to help those,
Those who have actually suffered.

Copyright Â© hardcoreputa ... [ 2003-08-04 09:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: undeserving (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 4th August 2003 @ 02:15:46 PM AEST
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dearest apryl,

of what all write
we have a voice
share or share not
we have that choice

you write from your heart
bringing to others a lift
and as a fellow poetess
your truely a dear gift

hugs n' love nessa

Re: undeserving (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Tuesday, 5th August 2003 @ 07:47:38 PM AEST
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this was very good trying to help people is very admirable and does not make you useless in any sense. Great t hought provoking poem.

Bobo (Joel)

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