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[catid] => 1
[aid] => Mick
[title] => Wishes Hurt
[time] => 2003-08-04 06:25:00
[hometext] => Wish I would not wish more,
Never meant to be true, hurt evermore.
[bodytext] => Wish I could understand my confusion,
Give twisted thoughts a solution.
Road of life is full of cryptic signs,
Deceive me into searching the right way of mine.
Blistered feet walking on the burning ground,
Into forgotten pieces, breaking me down.
Silent screams eagerly seek release,
Punished tears fall inside without cease.
Wish I were indifferent to feel the pain,
Burning and eating me up from inside.
Nerve-grating depression plays with the brain,
Cutting me down with all its might.
Graven images that dance on the walls,
Reflecting my immortal damaged shadows.
Sunken eyes have seen many falls,
To rest, I lie in the garden of sorrows.
A zombie is what I have become,
All the wishes have gone undone.
Wish I would not wish more,
Never meant to be true, hurt evermore.
Nevertheless, will keep on wishing till my last breath,
Have never learned to loose hope.
But if this is what meant to be,
With darkness, I will happily cope!
[comments] => 19
[counter] => 396
[topic] => 14
[informant] => Saira
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[ihome] => 0
[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 10
[ratings] => 2
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => DreamsandWishes
)
Wishes Hurt
Contributed by
Saira
on
Monday, 4th August 2003 @ 06:25:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Wish I could understand my confusion,
Give twisted thoughts a solution.
Road of life is full of cryptic signs,
Deceive me into searching the right way of mine.
Blistered feet walking on the burning ground,
Into forgotten pieces, breaking me down.
Silent screams eagerly seek release,
Punished tears fall inside without cease.
Wish I were indifferent to feel the pain,
Burning and eating me up from inside.
Nerve-grating depression plays with the brain,
Cutting me down with all its might.
Graven images that dance on the walls,
Reflecting my immortal damaged shadows.
Sunken eyes have seen many falls,
To rest, I lie in the garden of sorrows.
A zombie is what I have become,
All the wishes have gone undone.
Wish I would not wish more,
Never meant to be true, hurt evermore.
Nevertheless, will keep on wishing till my last breath,
Have never learned to loose hope.
But if this is what meant to be,
With darkness, I will happily cope!
Copyright ©
Saira
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2003-08-04 06:25:00]
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Re: Wishes Hurt
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by venkat on
Monday, 4th August 2003 @ 07:07:17 AM AEST
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| this is great..a talented write. venkat |
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Re: Wishes Hurt
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 4th August 2003 @ 09:04:50 AM AEST
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very good write
Shari |
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Re: Wishes Hurt
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by DreamWeaver on
Monday, 4th August 2003 @ 09:16:32 AM AEST
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| Don't give up hope ... this is a wonderful poem ... Jan |
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Re: Wishes Hurt
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by PoloRM on
Monday, 4th August 2003 @ 09:17:30 AM AEST
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Better fake hope than no hope at all.
Beautiful poem, loved it.
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Re: Wishes Hurt
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by rusty1980 on
Monday, 4th August 2003 @ 01:29:50 PM AEST
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| I liked the theme much!! |
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Re: Wishes Hurt
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 4th August 2003 @ 10:55:22 PM AEST
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| very good write, it saddens me though, keep hope, stay well. Crow |
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Re: Wishes Hurt
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by Saira on
Tuesday, 5th August 2003 @ 09:03:19 AM AEST
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| Will never. Thank you Jan. |
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Re: Wishes Hurt
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by Saira on
Tuesday, 5th August 2003 @ 09:09:07 AM AEST
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| True. Thank you PoloRm. |
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Re: Wishes Hurt
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by gohar on
Tuesday, 5th August 2003 @ 03:44:27 PM AEST
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AsSalam,
Absolutely nice poem. Quite thought provoking.
Ashraf Gohar Goreja |
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Re: Wishes Hurt
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by Saira on
Tuesday, 5th August 2003 @ 04:04:34 PM AEST
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Waalikum Assalam!
Thank you very much Sir for liking my poem.
Saira
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Re: Wishes Hurt
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by Saira on
Tuesday, 5th August 2003 @ 04:17:24 PM AEST
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| Thank you very much rusty for your kind remarks. |
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Re: Wishes Hurt
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by Saira on
Tuesday, 5th August 2003 @ 04:20:14 PM AEST
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| Thank you Crow for your kind comments. You too stay well. |
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Re: Wishes Hurt
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 5th August 2003 @ 04:42:47 PM AEST
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Once again a very good write from an immensely talented friend of mine!!
We all Wish willfully that may all Our wishes come true,
But Only the Lucky ones get a chance to have them thru.
Zee
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Re: Wishes Hurt
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by lovingcritters on
Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 07:21:52 PM AEST
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My dear friend Saira,
Your talent is immense my dear.
When you can take words that lament, and then walk right off the page into our hearts.
Never stop wishing, it's the "life-line" for our tomorrows.
Our Loving Father will never fulfill your wishes if for you it will mean sorrows.
He knows what's best for you, in any given circumstance.,,,,,have great faith in his ability to grant good wishes we desire, and not just by mere chance!
Oh, how lovely are your poems. My heart is lost in your ability, and deeply touched by your futility!
lovingcritters
Connie Sue
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Re: Wishes Hurt
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by Saira on
Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 07:55:22 PM AEST
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Thank you very much dear Connie for your kind remarks.
I have a strong faith in Allah (God) and realize whatever happens, happens for our betterment only. As behind His every way there is always a good reason hidden. So we never should in any circumstances get disappointed and loose hope. Maybe that's why, with this faith, I'm very much living a contended life. Thanks To Allah (God). May He bless us all!
Once again thank you my friend.
Love
Saira |
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Re: Wishes Hurt
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by krystal on
Thursday, 14th August 2003 @ 08:21:57 AM AEST
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Saira this is beautiful my friend...your imagery is absolutely profound making me feel your pain right into the depths of my heart as well...You are so very talented my dear, please keep sharing with us!
Krystal:) |
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Re: Wishes Hurt
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by Saira on
Thursday, 14th August 2003 @ 04:13:28 PM AEST
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Hiya Krystal! Thank you very much for your appreciation and kind remarks. That means a lot to me!
Saira :o) |
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Re: Wishes Hurt
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 5th October 2003 @ 12:27:14 PM AEST
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| never loose hope, hang onto your wish rope:) excellent poem, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Wishes Hurt
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 05:22:50 PM AEST
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| very nicely written.Hope is something that keeps us going in the most difficult of times and our faith in Allah. GOOD WRITE GIRL!!! keep it up. |
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