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Failing to see many lies
Not able to look ahead
Nor gaze into your eyes,
I cannot bare to even whisper
Left alone, mixed emotions fill my head
Not sure of what truly exists anymore
Cant believe many words said,
Struggling to overcome
Thoughts that consume my mind
Seeking other ideas
Only then theres nothing to find,
Getting my life's meaning drop again
Adding on to another bad year
Filled with despair, hate, reject...
with hundreds of more tears,
Who do you turn to
when the one you seek to dry your eyes...
turns your whole world around
and instead makes you cry? [comments] => 8 [counter] => 226 [topic] => 22 [informant] => PsychoticDreamz [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Darkened Path

Contributed by PsychoticDreamz on Sunday, 3rd August 2003 @ 03:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Walking down a now darkened path
Failing to see many lies
Not able to look ahead
Nor gaze into your eyes,
I cannot bare to even whisper
Left alone, mixed emotions fill my head
Not sure of what truly exists anymore
Cant believe many words said,
Struggling to overcome
Thoughts that consume my mind
Seeking other ideas
Only then theres nothing to find,
Getting my life's meaning drop again
Adding on to another bad year
Filled with despair, hate, reject...
with hundreds of more tears,
Who do you turn to
when the one you seek to dry your eyes...
turns your whole world around
and instead makes you cry?

Copyright © PsychoticDreamz ... [ 2003-08-03 15:45:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Darkened Path (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 3rd August 2003 @ 06:32:46 PM AEST
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I think it sounds as though you have had to face a lot of pain and confusion.

Your poem is really striking and powerful and I think your writing style is brilliant.

Thank you for sharing this and I hope you manage to stay strong and cope with this.

sleepless_siren

Re: Darkened Path (User Rating: 1 )
by xxmonstahxx on Sunday, 3rd August 2003 @ 08:49:58 PM AEST
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very sad and beautiful

Re: Darkened Path (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Sunday, 3rd August 2003 @ 11:33:09 PM AEST
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very dark and beautiful....well put!!!!

Re: Darkened Path (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Sunday, 3rd August 2003 @ 11:34:26 PM AEST
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very dark and beautiful....well put!!!!

Re: Darkened Path (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Sunday, 3rd August 2003 @ 11:34:56 PM AEST
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very dark and beautiful....well put!!!!

Re: Darkened Path (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Sunday, 3rd August 2003 @ 11:35:33 PM AEST
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very dark and beautiful...well put

Re: Darkened Path (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 4th August 2003 @ 01:05:23 AM AEST
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this is beautiful yet sad many emotions wrapped into this poem.
michelle

Re: Darkened Path (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Monday, 4th August 2003 @ 05:00:49 PM AEST
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I thought this was awesome. I can relate to it a lot. I loved the last 3 lines especially

Bobo (Joel)

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