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Array ( [sid] => 21406 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Beloved [time] => 2003-08-03 05:45:00 [hometext] => Memo to sister: relationship. [bodytext] => oh i guess i should have thought of you
i guess i should have thought of me
there's something more coming out of this
than my little twinge of the expectancy
what's the point of all your games?
you're playing quarters with my head
while i'm playing taboo still the same
wondering at what i should have said

the conduit is a ploy!
spearhead null and void
you say that you're related
i say that we're abated

oh so now you're a relative to me?
well i don't see the link from me to you
what's really going on here between us
when conversations bleed black and blue?
the air to breathe feels stagnant choked
someday you'll feel it just as well
but before the time bequeaths us both
the void gets old but who's to tell?

the minstrel is employed!
target acclaimed to but a boy
you say that we have changed
i say that we've estranged

so now what will will what now so
oh you want to solve this? no.

doesn't work so simple in the system
should have been a better answer
but what's it to you? you're related
eating family members like a cancer
i'm a dancer in this constipation
gracing over each and every quickdraw
in exclamation you pull revolvers
and try to balance on your seesaw

the charlemagne is a droid!
consequence of leaving toys
think about all the times you've gone about
and try to make me just a little bit coy

so now what will will what now so
oh you want to work it? no. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 160 [topic] => 21 [informant] => daniel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
Beloved

Contributed by daniel on Sunday, 3rd August 2003 @ 05:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



oh i guess i should have thought of you
i guess i should have thought of me
there's something more coming out of this
than my little twinge of the expectancy
what's the point of all your games?
you're playing quarters with my head
while i'm playing taboo still the same
wondering at what i should have said

the conduit is a ploy!
spearhead null and void
you say that you're related
i say that we're abated

oh so now you're a relative to me?
well i don't see the link from me to you
what's really going on here between us
when conversations bleed black and blue?
the air to breathe feels stagnant choked
someday you'll feel it just as well
but before the time bequeaths us both
the void gets old but who's to tell?

the minstrel is employed!
target acclaimed to but a boy
you say that we have changed
i say that we've estranged

so now what will will what now so
oh you want to solve this? no.

doesn't work so simple in the system
should have been a better answer
but what's it to you? you're related
eating family members like a cancer
i'm a dancer in this constipation
gracing over each and every quickdraw
in exclamation you pull revolvers
and try to balance on your seesaw

the charlemagne is a droid!
consequence of leaving toys
think about all the times you've gone about
and try to make me just a little bit coy

so now what will will what now so
oh you want to work it? no.




Copyright © daniel ... [ 2003-08-03 05:45:00]
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Re: Beloved (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Sunday, 3rd August 2003 @ 08:33:06 AM AEST
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I hope you and your sis work things out soon. As for the write... it's awesome, lots of great lines in there! :)

~ Dani :)



Re: Beloved (User Rating: 1 )
by hardcoreputa on Sunday, 3rd August 2003 @ 01:53:51 PM AEST
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best of luck for you and your sister... your vocab is superb, and you are a great poet. all siblings have their differences, i hope you end up working it out ~Apryl


Re: Beloved (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Sunday, 3rd August 2003 @ 08:04:55 PM AEST
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I too hope that things get settle down nicely and smoothly between both of you.
Great write...your emotions flow beautifully.
Saira




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