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Array ( [sid] => 21402 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Thick and thin [time] => 2003-08-03 02:35:00 [hometext] => this is the least I can do [bodytext] => I ask the winds
to take my words
to places yet unknown
through the tracks of dust
and memories of passage.
Places in the here, the future...past,
from the ink stains and annals of creation
to the micro chips and galaxies of regeneration.
I have arrived here with cautious discretion
so far I have been riding the rails,
the train of life with all the strife,
getting ready to embrace the dark stranger soon
my mysterious hero, death as we call, the quietus.
Meanwhile I shall avoid delivering replacement strings
to the outskirts of broken melody, tempered tempo.
I shall, again and again, without a strain...abstain
from pain,..then again.. I should refrain from nothing
given half the chance to dance to the rhyhm of my tune
Will somebody pull the plug and play that note for me
which talks of deep places I have never been before
beyond what the eyes can see, where the mist is thick
that stretch across the frets where the going is rough
can be smoothened by the fragments of my resolve.
I assure the World of this and implore the winds
to grant me this historically unique opportunity
to transpose wholeness where it would make a dent
through the thick and thin of my lucid dreams. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 179 [topic] => 55 [informant] => vincy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )
Thick and thin

Contributed by vincy on Sunday, 3rd August 2003 @ 02:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems



I ask the winds
to take my words
to places yet unknown
through the tracks of dust
and memories of passage.
Places in the here, the future...past,
from the ink stains and annals of creation
to the micro chips and galaxies of regeneration.
I have arrived here with cautious discretion
so far I have been riding the rails,
the train of life with all the strife,
getting ready to embrace the dark stranger soon
my mysterious hero, death as we call, the quietus.
Meanwhile I shall avoid delivering replacement strings
to the outskirts of broken melody, tempered tempo.
I shall, again and again, without a strain...abstain
from pain,..then again.. I should refrain from nothing
given half the chance to dance to the rhyhm of my tune
Will somebody pull the plug and play that note for me
which talks of deep places I have never been before
beyond what the eyes can see, where the mist is thick
that stretch across the frets where the going is rough
can be smoothened by the fragments of my resolve.
I assure the World of this and implore the winds
to grant me this historically unique opportunity
to transpose wholeness where it would make a dent
through the thick and thin of my lucid dreams.




Copyright © vincy ... [ 2003-08-03 02:35:00]
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Re: Thick and thin (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Sunday, 3rd August 2003 @ 08:31:39 AM AEST
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Your writes always give me something to think about. I enjoy them very much
Shari


Re: Thick and thin (User Rating: 1 )
by hardcoreputa on Sunday, 3rd August 2003 @ 02:08:59 PM AEST
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a great poem... very interesting. i cant wait to read more of you work ~Apryl


Re: Thick and thin (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Monday, 4th August 2003 @ 02:58:11 AM AEST
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a great write..
I had passed through all such feelings.
there is a chip at the crown of human body.
if the individual's energy passes towards that point it lights up..and then you will drift into a state of absolute consciousness...
all negative force of death losses it's hold on us..
when I reached that state through my mantra Yoga I had remained in a trance for 3 weeks..which caused so much worry to my family..
Dear friend..
I don't know how to advise you............
but I can whole heartedly pray for you.
Blessings... venkat



Re: Thick and thin (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Monday, 4th August 2003 @ 09:30:14 PM AEST
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Your poems never fail to get my attention. Wonderful write.
Saira




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