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[aid] => Mick
[title] => That Girl
[time] => 2003-08-02 23:35:00
[hometext] => i just starting writing.....and this is what i came up with.......im not sure if its good or not, im counting on all of u to let me know.....
[bodytext] => it was cold outside she was on her own her feet were numb from all the snow she started to cry and wondered why why did mommy leave me here to die? she begged to stay she cried and wailed it did no good all it got her was skin cold and pale that little girl had been bad and her punishment was very sad that little girl was sorry for everything she'd done but it was too late apologies were useless she longed for the warmth of her bed and the humming of her fan she slept in a dark alley with some old newspaper as a blanket..... if she was lucky you could look in her eyes and see she had been through hell but u didn't do a thing to help you were just like the others you felt sorry looking at her so why did you keep walking? now this girl is frozen stiff she lies dead and her eyes no longer shine with that glow of life instead they are cold and blank she asked for your help you saw the tears which constantly filled her eyes all she wanted was to be loved to know that some one cared but you ignored that frail girl just kept walking forgot her..... until u saw the news that cold dark night............. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 167 [topic] => 43 [informant] => eeka_taquito [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
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