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Array ( [sid] => 21363 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Self-Performed Critique [time] => 2003-08-02 05:05:00 [hometext] => Who do I look like? [bodytext] => Picture, picture, on the wall,
am I short or am I tall?
I cannot see as others see me,
Do I look like Jimmy Cagney.

I get to wonder, if I blunder,
If my head's a simple dunder?
Know I not how look I be
Somehow I, of me, don't see.

This may sound a wee bit stilted,
For I may be a wee bit tilted,
I need not look at me and grunt
standing at the mirror front.

All females a dressing table
Have they not to make them able,
See themselves as GOD had made them
Douse themselves and then parade them.

How you look, a people puzzle,
Look ye grand and people nuzzle,
That's the aim of every person,
Love, be loved is life's immersion. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 176 [topic] => 7 [informant] => norm [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => HumorPoetry )

Self-Performed Critique

Contributed by norm on Saturday, 2nd August 2003 @ 05:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: HumorPoetry

Picture, picture, on the wall,
am I short or am I tall?
I cannot see as others see me,
Do I look like Jimmy Cagney.

I get to wonder, if I blunder,
If my head's a simple dunder?
Know I not how look I be
Somehow I, of me, don't see.

This may sound a wee bit stilted,
For I may be a wee bit tilted,
I need not look at me and grunt
standing at the mirror front.

All females a dressing table
Have they not to make them able,
See themselves as GOD had made them
Douse themselves and then parade them.

How you look, a people puzzle,
Look ye grand and people nuzzle,
That's the aim of every person,
Love, be loved is life's immersion.

Copyright © norm ... [ 2003-08-02 05:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Self-Performed Critique (User Rating: 1 )
by PoloRM on Saturday, 2nd August 2003 @ 05:30:27 AM AEST
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You really look like Norm...

Your kind of self-perfomed critique
I found to be very 'sympathique'
Your rhymes as always 'symphonique'
And your poem I title 'magnifique'.

Re: Self-Performed Critique (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Saturday, 2nd August 2003 @ 09:40:24 AM AEST
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To me Dear Norm your best part
Is your most beautiful heart
So as the day goes shoot
I find you kinda cute

Shari

Re: Self-Performed Critique (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 2nd August 2003 @ 11:46:16 AM AEST
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dearest norm,
to me you look like a dear friend
and many days my heart you mend
with smiles and laughs and poetry
im happy your a friend to me:)
hugs n' love nessa

Re: Self-Performed Critique (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 2nd August 2003 @ 08:44:35 PM AEST
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tis' you dear Norm,who I see...
Only words in front of me.
And I love the Norm I do behold,
as often my words,have I told.
So look not in the daunting mirror,
Look within,it comes much cleraer!!!
Angel always....{{{Norm}}} godspeed! joni

Re: Self-Performed Critique (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 2nd August 2003 @ 08:45:23 PM AEST
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tis' you dear Norm,who I see...
Only words in front of me.
And I love the Norm I do behold,
as often my words,have I told.
So look not in the daunting mirror,
Look within,it comes much cleraer!!!
Angel always....{{{Norm}}} godspeed! joni

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