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I...
Contributed by
LovingWhispers
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Saturday, 2nd August 2003 @ 12:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I awake somewhere within the night
I think of you and shed a tear
I miss you so and cannot sleep
I just wish that you were here
I go about my daily chores
I drop plates and burn myself
I cannot keep you from my thoughts
I can think of nothing else
I close my eyes and pretend
I dream of being with you
I sigh for when I open my eyes
I have tears,yet they're not new
I always have these little tears
I dry them,still they flow
I love you more with every day
I'm in love,don't you know
I write this poem so simply
I choose no fancy words
I pour my heart so freely
I hope that you have heard
I want to hold you in my arms
I want you to hold me too
I need to have you by my side
I am lost here without you
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I know that my words are simple.....but this is merely because...simply...I love you..
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Re: I...
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by PoloRM on
Saturday, 2nd August 2003 @ 12:54:04 AM AEST
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Simple words can do... miracles =)
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Simple Love is a gift to hold
As precious as silver and as gold
As the years of life begin to unfold
You grow younger and never old.
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Re: I...
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by Crow on
Saturday, 2nd August 2003 @ 01:36:37 AM AEST
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| expression straight from the heart, a wonderful , natural thing. Crow |
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 2nd August 2003 @ 02:09:19 AM AEST
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simply beautiful, and powerful write
Shari |
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 2nd August 2003 @ 02:14:36 AM AEST
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This is so very sweet, Whispers.. I could feel the love in this poem....
Hugs from your island friend..
Jenni |
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Re: I...
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by venkat on
Saturday, 2nd August 2003 @ 05:27:13 AM AEST
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recently I have read some of your earlier postings..and now I am able see the depth of your feelings. these words may be a simple
yet they have come out through your heart..this poem is a priceless one...venkat
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Re: I...
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by DreamWeaver on
Saturday, 2nd August 2003 @ 10:42:16 AM AEST
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| Straight from the heart ... how can he resist :))) beautifully written ... Jan |
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Re: I...
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by norm on
Monday, 4th August 2003 @ 07:32:05 PM AEST
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I've decided a sure way,
To get a guys attention,
Send him a thousand bucks
Is that too delicate to mention?
This way you've got him on the hook
I think no less his taking,
Maybe two Gees would be better,
Then a house call he'd be making.
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Re: I...
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by Saira on
Monday, 4th August 2003 @ 08:52:11 PM AEST
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I have always found and seen everlasting beauty in simplicity. So I see in your lovely poem! Hope he comes to know your love so deep and true for him soon!
Best wishes
Saira
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Re: I...
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 9th August 2003 @ 10:47:31 PM AEST
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| this is so beautiful sharon.................. *sigh..............* big hugs n' love, nessa |
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