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Array ( [sid] => 21315 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Without You [time] => 2003-07-31 22:05:00 [hometext] => Old feelings die hard in a relationship. This is dedicated to a special ex-boyfriend of mine, who will remain forever in my heart. [bodytext] => I'm so confused
Feel like I'm dying inside
My stomach tied in knots
My heart torn in two
Half of me wants to give in to you
Give in to what my heart longs for, a second chance
But the other half holds back
Knowing it can never be--again.
Never be what I want it to be
What I yearn for, what I desire
For you and I are too different
Two halves that will never make a whole
Only a hole in my heart.
Must I forever ache inside,
Knowing this is how it's meant to be?
I know the answer's no,
So I cry a little
And wait for the sun to come up
Because it always does
And I live yet another day without you--
The way it has to be. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 291 [topic] => 22 [informant] => thatabbygirl [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Without You

Contributed by thatabbygirl on Thursday, 31st July 2003 @ 10:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



I'm so confused
Feel like I'm dying inside
My stomach tied in knots
My heart torn in two
Half of me wants to give in to you
Give in to what my heart longs for, a second chance
But the other half holds back
Knowing it can never be--again.
Never be what I want it to be
What I yearn for, what I desire
For you and I are too different
Two halves that will never make a whole
Only a hole in my heart.
Must I forever ache inside,
Knowing this is how it's meant to be?
I know the answer's no,
So I cry a little
And wait for the sun to come up
Because it always does
And I live yet another day without you--
The way it has to be.




Copyright © thatabbygirl ... [ 2003-07-31 22:05:00]
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Re: Without You (User Rating: 1 )
by Jason_Robert_Britt on Friday, 1st August 2003 @ 03:06:08 AM AEST
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Really good job.... love the lines :
Two halves that will never make a whole
Only a hole in my heart.
I really feel the passion and sadness
that this love has brought you.
Your very creative.... don't stop writting.


Re: Without You (User Rating: 1 )
by squeesh on Friday, 1st August 2003 @ 04:04:56 AM AEST
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That's a really cute poem. Just hang in there and never let those memories of the great times you had with that person fade away. They'll always be in your heart and that's what counts.
~squeesh


Re: Without You (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Friday, 1st August 2003 @ 06:41:47 AM AEST
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This is so sad, it really touched me. Especially the end. Wonderful job, you have a way with words.

~ Moonlit


Re: Without You (User Rating: 1 )
by garyh on Friday, 1st August 2003 @ 08:25:22 AM AEST
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nice write.. you seem to have a good outlook on things and look for the best... very good.. i would say more but im tired.. sorry


Re: Without You (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Saturday, 2nd August 2003 @ 02:08:10 AM AEST
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Hey I like this and I want you to keep it up




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