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Array ( [sid] => 21304 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Cursed [time] => 2003-07-31 18:05:00 [hometext] => This poem is sort of in turn how I am feeling lately. Everything I have been through kept bottled up is coming out. I don't know how to explain it you would just haft to read.
X [bodytext] =>
"Cursed"

now ill just push my feelings aside
hide all that has built inside
the fear crying out in my mind
tears falling behind my eyes
then it all crashes down
slit your wrists but no one's around
all you ever wanted was to be found
and now you feel nothing
now a memory of a grave
and your promise breaks
say goodbye to the red skies
as the stories told
my life unfolds
this metal coffin collapses in on me
can't breathe
the laughter of a child brings me back to life
sorrounded by the lights
i see the blood, is it mine
cant move almost crippled by the pain
these are my words never spoken before
all of the things, all of this pain
i don't want to close my eyes
let the blood drip down my face
all of these memories, why do i feel this way
dont want to sleep afraid i will awake
always sorrounded yet always alone
as i stand here unmoveable unbreakable like a stone
you all stand in awe
admiring me for my will, strength, passion and love
why doesn't anyone think any of this has effected me
when is it my turn to be weak
my curse, my love, my will, my passion, my strength
all the same same thing [comments] => 3 [counter] => 255 [topic] => 48 [informant] => exiled [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Cursed

Contributed by exiled on Thursday, 31st July 2003 @ 06:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry




"Cursed"

now ill just push my feelings aside
hide all that has built inside
the fear crying out in my mind
tears falling behind my eyes
then it all crashes down
slit your wrists but no one's around
all you ever wanted was to be found
and now you feel nothing
now a memory of a grave
and your promise breaks
say goodbye to the red skies
as the stories told
my life unfolds
this metal coffin collapses in on me
can't breathe
the laughter of a child brings me back to life
sorrounded by the lights
i see the blood, is it mine
cant move almost crippled by the pain
these are my words never spoken before
all of the things, all of this pain
i don't want to close my eyes
let the blood drip down my face
all of these memories, why do i feel this way
dont want to sleep afraid i will awake
always sorrounded yet always alone
as i stand here unmoveable unbreakable like a stone
you all stand in awe
admiring me for my will, strength, passion and love
why doesn't anyone think any of this has effected me
when is it my turn to be weak
my curse, my love, my will, my passion, my strength
all the same same thing




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Re: Cursed (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Thursday, 31st July 2003 @ 06:44:41 PM AEST
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you said how i've felt lately too......
i've always just wanted to be found


Re: Cursed (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 31st July 2003 @ 11:27:27 PM AEST
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dearest sam, you always have a friend in me, *heres my shoulder* huggers n' love to you n' oodles of smiles:)


Re: Cursed (User Rating: 1 )
by Jason_Robert_Britt on Friday, 1st August 2003 @ 02:07:14 AM AEST
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"always sorrounded yet always alone
as i stand here unmoveable unbreakable like a stone." I liked this line the best.... it's clever. Good write...




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