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[title] => Self-Pity to Self-Hatred
[time] => 2003-07-30 14:35:00
[hometext] => * I chose war poetry because it portrays the war going on inside of me. This poem sounds hopeless and I guess it is hehe. *
[bodytext] => Breaths come in shallow gasps If I close my eyes, I envision myself falling I'm crumbling like an old building I'm useless like a plastic water gun Bought at a buck or two store Trying to lift my head My eyes are cloudy, losing control Tasting terror, feeling fear, married to malice Stumbled across this path To many times to count Everything's a mess Eyes wide, mouth wide open Trying to gulp down air Like a fish outta water Willing the pain to stay Yet wanting it to go away Slipping in and out of consciousness The burns on my arm are throbbing Self-pity starts to take over And self-hatred replaces that Pain takes me to a new dimension I want to hold the rose, But I'm impaled on the thorn [comments] => 3 [counter] => 230 [topic] => 57 [informant] => bobotheclown [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => war )
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