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The way it floats in the air

Your smile
And the way it makes me feel agile

Your luscious lips
And I can't forget those wonderful hips

Your eyes are so cute
I don't think anyone would dispute

Your cheerful cheeks
Make me where I can't even speak

Your beauty
Is truly like no other

That's why I want you
And no other [comments] => 4 [counter] => 158 [topic] => 43 [informant] => garyh [notes] => [ihome] => 1 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Your Beauty

Contributed by garyh on Wednesday, 30th July 2003 @ 01:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Your short blonde hair
The way it floats in the air

Your smile
And the way it makes me feel agile

Your luscious lips
And I can't forget those wonderful hips

Your eyes are so cute
I don't think anyone would dispute

Your cheerful cheeks
Make me where I can't even speak

Your beauty
Is truly like no other

That's why I want you
And no other

Copyright © garyh ... [ 2003-07-30 13:05:00]
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Re: Your Beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by Jason_Robert_Britt on Monday, 18th August 2003 @ 03:28:44 AM AEST
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Lust... what lovely thing it can be. This poem reminded me of a high school crush, and how it made my day just to see them, even though they didn't know I existed. great write.

Re: Your Beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by CrimsonTearz on Saturday, 30th August 2003 @ 11:38:27 PM AEST
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good poem..

Re: Your Beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by krismisevski on Friday, 5th September 2003 @ 02:26:20 AM AEST
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This poem reminded me of an elementary school crush. There's nothing wrong with being honest, but there are so many cliches in this, it seems like you found a website, posted a poem, and told the girl about it just to impress her. Seems like a rip off to me, but I hope it worked out for you.

Re: Your Beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by garyh on Friday, 5th September 2003 @ 02:24:50 PM AEST
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personally i have never heard any of these so called "cliche" statements before... so i don't know how i could use them ;) and also the only websites that this poem is on is mine and this site. it is copyrighted by me

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