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Just 1 single bullet, 1 single blow.

What am I to you except a pain.
If I were dead you would probably gain.

Am I the only 1 who feels this way?
Should I go on to see another day?

I'm confused and my lifes a mess.
with death, comes no stress.

Would anyone even cry?
I bet all eyes would stay dry.

Sometimes I just wanna end it.
If death is meant for me
I wish god would send it. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 273 [topic] => 36 [informant] => redrum33 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Should I Go?

Contributed by redrum33 on Tuesday, 29th July 2003 @ 05:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

If I died would you even know?
Just 1 single bullet, 1 single blow.

What am I to you except a pain.
If I were dead you would probably gain.

Am I the only 1 who feels this way?
Should I go on to see another day?

I'm confused and my lifes a mess.
with death, comes no stress.

Would anyone even cry?
I bet all eyes would stay dry.

Sometimes I just wanna end it.
If death is meant for me
I wish god would send it.

Copyright © redrum33 ... [ 2003-07-29 17:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Should I Go? (User Rating: 1 )
by Krazykaric on Wednesday, 30th July 2003 @ 04:16:41 PM AEST
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Taking your life is a drastic move. I hope that with these comments you will realize that you are a far much better person to do something like that. You were born for a reason, and if you take your life before your rightful time, you will be missing out on the one thing you were put on this life to do! Please message me back, im hear to talk if you need someone! Maybe my poems will help you realize your not alone?

Re: Should I Go? (User Rating: 1 )
by redrum33 on Thursday, 31st July 2003 @ 03:43:09 AM AEST
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I dont think i was put on this earth for anything, but if i was it better happen fast.

P.S. by the way..asl?

~Jay~

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