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the five senses
of a parents hate [bodytext] => I see you face before my eyes
But it is I you cannot see
I see the love you cannot give
Refuse to give to me

I smell the beer in your breath
But you cannot see my tears
I can see the way you’re acting
Hiding behind your fears

I taste the lies you say to me
But I pretend I do not know
I will always feel neglected
And so, so alone

I can touch your outer body
But you cannot feel the devotion
I can see that you don’t need me
And feel no real emotion

I hear the words you say to me
But I do not understand
How you can hurt me time after time
And still call yourself a man
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five senses

Contributed by tinka_belle on Tuesday, 29th July 2003 @ 02:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

I see you face before my eyes
But it is I you cannot see
I see the love you cannot give
Refuse to give to me

I smell the beer in your breath
But you cannot see my tears
I can see the way you’re acting
Hiding behind your fears

I taste the lies you say to me
But I pretend I do not know
I will always feel neglected
And so, so alone

I can touch your outer body
But you cannot feel the devotion
I can see that you don’t need me
And feel no real emotion

I hear the words you say to me
But I do not understand
How you can hurt me time after time
And still call yourself a man

Copyright Â© tinka_belle ... [ 2003-07-29 02:35:00]
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Re: five senses (User Rating: 1 )
by krystal on Tuesday, 29th July 2003 @ 04:01:40 AM AEST
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tinka belle this is wonderful, well expressed and well written...such an awful tragedy for children to go through so much at such a tender young age. I really enjoyed this, the last line is what really grabbed me for their is so much truth to it...fabulous. Krystal :)

Re: five senses (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Tuesday, 29th July 2003 @ 07:12:06 AM AEST
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Yep, I can relate to this. I just submitted a poem about my parents, in fact. They can be real, well, buttholes. :P

~ Moonlit

Re: five senses (User Rating: 1 )
by xxmonstahxx on Tuesday, 29th July 2003 @ 01:21:41 PM AEST
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so sad and yet so true..

Re: five senses (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Tuesday, 29th July 2003 @ 05:47:18 PM AEST
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this was very well expressed, my father was an alcoholic and had his abusive moments..it is not the way children should live

Shari

Re: five senses (User Rating: 1 )
by hardcoreputa on Saturday, 16th August 2003 @ 01:11:16 PM AEST
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you have been through so much. these horors that happen when we are children stay with us through our lives... i hope you have been able to cope a little bit... you have a lot of hurt that you mask with your hatred... a touching write... its good to know there are other ppl who have gone through similar things as me, but i wish no one else had too... ~Apryl

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