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Array ( [sid] => 21171 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => FATAL ILLUSIONS [time] => 2003-07-29 00:05:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => My illusions are becoming extremley fatal...
As I sit here alone rocking this cradle...

An empty cradle that was once full of love...
Once full of life...

Until you decided to act trife!!!
Until you started creeping though the night...
Just to come home so you can fight!!!
With an intellect who wont have that in his life!!
Thats why I told your crusty ass " to take a hike"...

As I expected. You left.
The departure of my daughter keeps my brain wrecked!!
How can I function when you've taken my breath? Taken my light. Taken my life!!
How can I function if there's no little girl climbling into my bed at night?

For protection from monsters & things, that infultrate her dreams.
For love & support that flows like a stream..From the man in me!!!!
Im not ashamed to show the feelings I have for she is my DAUGHTER!!!!
And cuz your a HOE, your making it harder!! For love to flow from 1 heart 2 another.

From Father to Seed..
Cuz of this I have, hot flash illusions of making you bleed...!
Finding your lover and making him see....the cold, dark, evil in me.
I want to unleash and bang your head against the concrete!
Fatal illusions configured from your lies & deciet..


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FATAL ILLUSIONS

Contributed by chard on Tuesday, 29th July 2003 @ 12:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



My illusions are becoming extremley fatal...
As I sit here alone rocking this cradle...

An empty cradle that was once full of love...
Once full of life...

Until you decided to act trife!!!
Until you started creeping though the night...
Just to come home so you can fight!!!
With an intellect who wont have that in his life!!
Thats why I told your crusty ass " to take a hike"...

As I expected. You left.
The departure of my daughter keeps my brain wrecked!!
How can I function when you've taken my breath? Taken my light. Taken my life!!
How can I function if there's no little girl climbling into my bed at night?

For protection from monsters & things, that infultrate her dreams.
For love & support that flows like a stream..From the man in me!!!!
Im not ashamed to show the feelings I have for she is my DAUGHTER!!!!
And cuz your a HOE, your making it harder!! For love to flow from 1 heart 2 another.

From Father to Seed..
Cuz of this I have, hot flash illusions of making you bleed...!
Finding your lover and making him see....the cold, dark, evil in me.
I want to unleash and bang your head against the concrete!
Fatal illusions configured from your lies & deciet..






Copyright © chard ... [ 2003-07-29 00:05:00]
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Re: FATAL ILLUSIONS (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 29th July 2003 @ 09:38:19 AM AEST
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such deep flowing emotions all ranges wrapped into one in this poem.Im sorry for your pain though.
michelle




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