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Array ( [sid] => 2113 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Rebirth [time] => 2002-08-10 15:15:18 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Your eyes,
Can see through me
Through the transparent beauty of my skin.
I am a fake,
The one who is pretending.

Your eyes,
Can see through the looking glass of yesteryear
Upon the beginning,
Upon the start
Where I relinquished myself.

Who Am I?
Your eyes can see,
Deep within the walls of my soul
Into the self I know not of.
Burning the brand of destiny,

Into my soul.
The scorching iron flares
The mocking voice of my conscious,
Telling me,my faults
Naggingly redundant.

Revealing the truth,
Of who I am,
Of who I was,
And of who I pretend to be.
The relentless bearer of virtue.

I had forgotten,
That under the mask lay a person
Other than the greasy layers of makeup.
A true person,
So delicately placed until further notice.

The buds of my flower open,
Baring the newborn petals of life.
Emerging from the cocoon, the butterfly
Fluttering the wings of a new destiny,
For the first time.

The truth suddenly apparent,
I'm all aglow with light.
my soul reborn for the watery depths
A second birth, another chance,
To prove I am once again me.

your eyes saw this,
They started this resurrection of soul
Now I am a whole, a real person!
Defying uncertainty!

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Rebirth

Contributed by Baby`Fallen`angel on Saturday, 10th August 2002 @ 03:15:18 PM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

Your eyes,
Can see through me
Through the transparent beauty of my skin.
I am a fake,
The one who is pretending.

Your eyes,
Can see through the looking glass of yesteryear
Upon the beginning,
Upon the start
Where I relinquished myself.

Who Am I?
Your eyes can see,
Deep within the walls of my soul
Into the self I know not of.
Burning the brand of destiny,

Into my soul.
The scorching iron flares
The mocking voice of my conscious,
Telling me,my faults
Naggingly redundant.

Revealing the truth,
Of who I am,
Of who I was,
And of who I pretend to be.
The relentless bearer of virtue.

I had forgotten,
That under the mask lay a person
Other than the greasy layers of makeup.
A true person,
So delicately placed until further notice.

The buds of my flower open,
Baring the newborn petals of life.
Emerging from the cocoon, the butterfly
Fluttering the wings of a new destiny,
For the first time.

The truth suddenly apparent,
I'm all aglow with light.
my soul reborn for the watery depths
A second birth, another chance,
To prove I am once again me.

your eyes saw this,
They started this resurrection of soul
Now I am a whole, a real person!
Defying uncertainty!

Copyright © Baby`Fallen`angel ... [ 2002-08-10 15:15:18]
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Re: Rebirth (User Rating: 1 )
by markymark on Sunday, 11th August 2002 @ 04:10:24 AM AEST
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This was a very inspiring read, it speaks volumes to me, its so well put together.
well done, so good...Mark...

Re: Rebirth (User Rating: 1 )
by Patricia_Petro on Sunday, 11th August 2002 @ 06:15:42 AM AEST
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I agree. You've managed to capture the joy of recovering the essence of who you really are. Very well done.
~Patricia

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