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Array ( [sid] => 2108 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => fogged [time] => 2002-08-10 15:07:29 [hometext] => just one of those moments... [bodytext] => textured surfaces calling out
of unknown perils lying ahead
warning me to be wary.
swiveling to and fro
my sink faucet
shakes it's silver head
expressing disgust
in actions taken.
appliances acknowledging me?
how? not possible.
unless my mind
is diluted with something.
cannot focus on the task at hand
or something... i think.
i'm so confused.
why am i here?
apparently i have purpose.
would someone care to share?
i ask for nothing
but the truth.
i want nothing
but nothing.
I want to feel
nothing.
i want to know
nothing.
non-existence
would follow
but i really don't mind.
or do i?
i want to live
without the hurt
of living.
i want to love
without the pain
of not knowing.
does any of this
make any sense?
no... probably not.
but do i care?
no.
yes.
i don't know.
[comments] => 5 [counter] => 192 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Adreana [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

fogged

Contributed by Adreana on Saturday, 10th August 2002 @ 03:07:29 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

textured surfaces calling out
of unknown perils lying ahead
warning me to be wary.
swiveling to and fro
my sink faucet
shakes it's silver head
expressing disgust
in actions taken.
appliances acknowledging me?
how? not possible.
unless my mind
is diluted with something.
cannot focus on the task at hand
or something... i think.
i'm so confused.
why am i here?
apparently i have purpose.
would someone care to share?
i ask for nothing
but the truth.
i want nothing
but nothing.
I want to feel
nothing.
i want to know
nothing.
non-existence
would follow
but i really don't mind.
or do i?
i want to live
without the hurt
of living.
i want to love
without the pain
of not knowing.
does any of this
make any sense?
no... probably not.
but do i care?
no.
yes.
i don't know.

Copyright © Adreana ... [ 2002-08-10 15:07:29]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: fogged (User Rating: 1 )
by Chrissie on Sunday, 11th August 2002 @ 01:37:23 AM AEST
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I've had many suh moments Adreana...I like this a lot...well written as always.
Chrissie

Re: fogged (User Rating: 1 )
by Patricia_Petro on Sunday, 11th August 2002 @ 06:23:39 AM AEST
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I know exactly what you mean. Well done.
~Patricia

Re: fogged (User Rating: 1 )
by Tigress on Sunday, 11th August 2002 @ 08:45:09 AM AEST
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well written.. expressed very well.. understood completely...
tygress

Re: fogged (User Rating: 1 )
by Butterat_Zool on Wednesday, 14th August 2002 @ 01:32:56 PM AEST
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What's up, girlfriend? Keep on posting. I'm lovin' it all. Great write. Butterat Zool.

Re: fogged (User Rating: 1 )
by Ash on Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 12:41:52 PM AEST
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I luv it, and understand completely. Had a few moments like it, and this poem explains and describes them so well. Good work.

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