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Array ( [sid] => 21019 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => are you like I ? [time] => 2003-07-26 11:35:00 [hometext] => they say girls fall in love with men like their fathers...
(in this poem the guy and the dad are you) [bodytext] => Are you
Scared
Of me
Like I am
Scared
Of you
Do my words
Hurt you
Like your fist
Hurts me
Does my smile
Deceive you
Like your promises
Deceive me
Are my lies
Oblivious to you
Like your reasons
Are oblivious to me
Do my tears
Break you
Like your anger
Breaks me
Do my memories
Scar you
Like your hands
Scar me
Does my blood
Stain you
Like you actions
Stain me
Are you
Scared
Of me
Like I am
Terrified
Of you
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 216 [topic] => 48 [informant] => tinka_belle [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

are you like I ?

Contributed by tinka_belle on Saturday, 26th July 2003 @ 11:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Are you
Scared
Of me
Like I am
Scared
Of you
Do my words
Hurt you
Like your fist
Hurts me
Does my smile
Deceive you
Like your promises
Deceive me
Are my lies
Oblivious to you
Like your reasons
Are oblivious to me
Do my tears
Break you
Like your anger
Breaks me
Do my memories
Scar you
Like your hands
Scar me
Does my blood
Stain you
Like you actions
Stain me
Are you
Scared
Of me
Like I am
Terrified
Of you

Copyright © tinka_belle ... [ 2003-07-26 11:35:00]
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Re: are you like I ? (User Rating: 1 )
by vincy on Saturday, 26th July 2003 @ 12:17:26 PM AEST
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Yaah, I call this action poetry
only it ends just about where
the opening verse is,
which is a miss, mss. renee.
Potentially a smashing performance piece.

Re: are you like I ? (User Rating: 1 )
by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on Sunday, 27th July 2003 @ 12:30:22 AM AEST
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Hi tank-belle,
this is one sad poem,i don't know why people think by hurting
others they are men.pleade leave this man before it to late.
this is a very good write.move on.

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