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[aid] => Mick
[title] => Mr. Godding
[time] => 2003-07-26 07:35:00
[hometext] => This is just a poem I had to write for a workshop.
[bodytext] => You're already leaving and I haven't even said a word Punching everything I said accompanied with your uncivil hands chocking make God you make me feel so pathetic now Across the skyline maybe you could find me there Cause It seems like thats the place that you had put me Because I hadn't planned on this happening, walking along the canal throwing rocks into the mucky water Maybe I should get some help you know? You know look out to someone Maybe I should go to the desert and let your piercing blue eyes dry out Or maybe I'll sleep in the garage and try and forget you And burn your ocean blue eyes with my pride Or maybe I could dissolve your eyes into a glass of bruisened watter Or maybe travel the abyss of the sea to drown your provoking smile Theres something different about tonight you know? Remember when we sped across that highway in your corvette? Windows down as the crispy Salt Lake air ran behind us? Or that time when we went to the neighborhood playground And you scarred your head- And I hate you for what you've done to me But I'm still thinking about you But your neighborhood seems so bitter, and your doorbell all so shallow I'm driving to your house and its 7 in the morning I've been here before but since you're there I feel much colder Maybe the smoke of my tears will suffocate you Maybe the sun can become your token of sadness forever The next time I see you I'll pass the pain off My everything is so close to you But I'll never let you take it Its the red corvette again and my heart is melting Sunken walls have become between us once and for all Our eyes pierced each other again Oh no I'm falling again [comments] => 1 [counter] => 161 [topic] => 22 [informant] => SpreadYourWings [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
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