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Array ( [sid] => 21006 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Just love [time] => 2003-07-26 05:35:00 [hometext] => written originally for my friend, who felt badly hurt, but I think we should more appreciate lovely moments we have lived, than spend our time crying for what we have lost.......... [bodytext] => Love came to you,
It was passionate and wonderful
Full of long chats, tears and smiles
Full of kisses and tight hugs
Times when one hour of waiting
Was as long as 7 days
Times of absolute happiness
Times when you felt you are really loved
Times when you knew you could never more
Live apart

And suddenly a storm in bright skies
So strong and less tight are the hugs
Heart more hurts than beats with bliss
Times full of hopelessness
Times of cruel insecurity
Times when you do not know what is coming

Then you asked her a question
And she has to make decision
It is not like to decide
If to buy an ice-cream or lolypop
It is just decision for the rest of life
You might know what she will say
And believe me she is in huge pain
She has never stopped loving thee
But she can not either leave that one
She lives with....

Don´t judge her for what she can not give
But admire her for what she did
You both lived a dream
It has finished but tell me honestly:
Would you prefer to die in the desert
Or go few more miles for water
To the oasis which could save your life?
Would you better never see the sun
Cos one day could be cloudy or just night?

Drop by drop we taste life
Day by day we find out
What is salty, bitter or sweet
Without these would never know
What else there could be
You lived a lovely dream
Still too many people have never had
Even it
You have lovely memories
To think about in the whiles of loneliness
Your bleeding heart hurts - so her does
Cos it is not easy to say: sorry, I can¨t.

Go and tell her thank you very much
For lovely times and for an every touch
Cos then your heart and also hers
Will find the right peace
Better to be good friends than
Bad husband and wife
And you never know what brings to you, your life
If circumstances cause your love finished so
Then it had to have sense, I am sure
Please wait a short while
Cos you will soon understand why
You will soon know why things happened
Why it was not how you wished and hoped
Do not complain for what you lost
Be grateful for what you got
You can never have the skies for yourself
But you can always share it with others.
So tastes the life

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 142 [topic] => 21 [informant] => aika [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
Just love

Contributed by aika on Saturday, 26th July 2003 @ 05:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



Love came to you,
It was passionate and wonderful
Full of long chats, tears and smiles
Full of kisses and tight hugs
Times when one hour of waiting
Was as long as 7 days
Times of absolute happiness
Times when you felt you are really loved
Times when you knew you could never more
Live apart

And suddenly a storm in bright skies
So strong and less tight are the hugs
Heart more hurts than beats with bliss
Times full of hopelessness
Times of cruel insecurity
Times when you do not know what is coming

Then you asked her a question
And she has to make decision
It is not like to decide
If to buy an ice-cream or lolypop
It is just decision for the rest of life
You might know what she will say
And believe me she is in huge pain
She has never stopped loving thee
But she can not either leave that one
She lives with....

Don´t judge her for what she can not give
But admire her for what she did
You both lived a dream
It has finished but tell me honestly:
Would you prefer to die in the desert
Or go few more miles for water
To the oasis which could save your life?
Would you better never see the sun
Cos one day could be cloudy or just night?

Drop by drop we taste life
Day by day we find out
What is salty, bitter or sweet
Without these would never know
What else there could be
You lived a lovely dream
Still too many people have never had
Even it
You have lovely memories
To think about in the whiles of loneliness
Your bleeding heart hurts - so her does
Cos it is not easy to say: sorry, I can¨t.

Go and tell her thank you very much
For lovely times and for an every touch
Cos then your heart and also hers
Will find the right peace
Better to be good friends than
Bad husband and wife
And you never know what brings to you, your life
If circumstances cause your love finished so
Then it had to have sense, I am sure
Please wait a short while
Cos you will soon understand why
You will soon know why things happened
Why it was not how you wished and hoped
Do not complain for what you lost
Be grateful for what you got
You can never have the skies for yourself
But you can always share it with others.
So tastes the life





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Re: Just love (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Sunday, 27th July 2003 @ 07:41:12 AM AEST
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Oh dear Aika,
That was a beautiful write.....the wisdom you possess for such a young woman always amazes me, but even more than that, your words sing even being translated from another language! You do such good work, keep them coming. I'll be waiting to read them and enjoy myself!
lovingcritters,
ConSue


Re: Just love (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 06:59:00 PM AEST
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Never been there never done that so you're talkin about me to. Nice write




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