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Array ( [sid] => 20999 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Cold Feet [time] => 2003-07-26 02:05:00 [hometext] => We watch the chances we have
To share our love
All slip into the past
Hoping for another
When tomorrow comes at last. [bodytext] => Cold Feet (a song)
R. Dafremen

Hey there wonder why
You make me laugh
You make me cry
With your cold feet
And your silly way of making me numb

Hey there gotta know
Is there a reason
That you gotta go?
See..I'm all alone
And I thought we could get out of the cold...you know?

Take a short trip to anywhere
You get the coffee
I'll pay the fare
And we'll talk about
All the things we never thought we'd get out.

Then when they're closing up
When your toes are warm
You've drained your cup
And I've drained mine
Time for lonely folx to be off to bed.

We give our hugs say our goodbyes
I look into
Your lovely eyes
And I want to tell you something
But the things I say just get in the way...you know?

Hey there wonder why
As you turn to leave
I start to cry
Cuz I know I'm all alone
And I know that soon your feet will be cold. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 162 [topic] => 2 [informant] => dafremen [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Cold Feet

Contributed by dafremen on Saturday, 26th July 2003 @ 02:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Cold Feet (a song)
R. Dafremen

Hey there wonder why
You make me laugh
You make me cry
With your cold feet
And your silly way of making me numb

Hey there gotta know
Is there a reason
That you gotta go?
See..I'm all alone
And I thought we could get out of the cold...you know?

Take a short trip to anywhere
You get the coffee
I'll pay the fare
And we'll talk about
All the things we never thought we'd get out.

Then when they're closing up
When your toes are warm
You've drained your cup
And I've drained mine
Time for lonely folx to be off to bed.

We give our hugs say our goodbyes
I look into
Your lovely eyes
And I want to tell you something
But the things I say just get in the way...you know?

Hey there wonder why
As you turn to leave
I start to cry
Cuz I know I'm all alone
And I know that soon your feet will be cold.




Copyright © dafremen ... [ 2003-07-26 02:05:00]
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Re: Cold Feet (User Rating: 1 )
by yellow_sundragon on Saturday, 26th July 2003 @ 03:24:11 AM AEST
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I like this. Thanks for sharing it.

*J*


Re: Cold Feet (User Rating: 1 )
by Ronald on Saturday, 26th July 2003 @ 04:51:40 AM AEST
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Hey, this is creative! I enjoyed this! Great job!! Kudos to ya!!


Re: Cold Feet (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Saturday, 26th July 2003 @ 07:28:01 AM AEST
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Everytime I read your writes,I am lost for what I truly want to say...One of these days lol..I will find what it is that your poems say to me...and what it is that so reminds me and makes me think of seasons,and raindrops on window panes,a hand outstretched to a closing door.......I just cant.arghhhhhh its annoying lol..But anyway...I loved this poem... :)


Re: Cold Feet (User Rating: 1 )
by dafremen on Saturday, 26th July 2003 @ 10:16:32 AM AEST
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Your kind words are so appreciated Lovely Whispered Heart. Your support stokes the fires of imagination, motivation and inspiration. No writer could ask any more from a reader. Thank you much, love.

Yours in breath, flesh and heart
Your brother,

Daf


Re: Cold Feet (User Rating: 1 )
by vincy on Saturday, 26th July 2003 @ 10:27:44 AM AEST
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There those moments in life when you wanna say"stay"
but you go numb, you grow dumb, your tongue freezes.
This poem brings that up and I recall in my case,
how awkward the absence of the right words were
especially when all one wanted was to be together.




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