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Array ( [sid] => 20996 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Bleach [time] => 2003-07-26 00:35:00 [hometext] => yep...bleach is my poison [bodytext] => I'll sip away on Chardonay
Along with a poison so sweet
Feed you all these stupid lines
Let you choke on your deceit.
Do you need some mouth to mouth my dear?
Well don't you worry, help is here.
So elegantly you've fallen into my trap
But wait a minute my lips are chap
Let me moisten them with poison
As you get ready for all of this
No time to prepare; your fate sealed with my kiss
Never thought this would be your death?
That you'd be looking at me, struggling for your last breath?
But I planned all this out, all the nights I cried
I dreamed of you to be by my side
Even if it ends up a double suicide
So here was the plan, you should know before you die
I was sick of being sad, sicking of yearning for your high
They'll all think you came over, found me dead on the floor
With a note next to my bed saying I just couldn't take it anymore
I couldn't take that you were out of my reach
So I took a bottle of wine and a gallon of bleach
Drank both until my fate was drawn
Drank until the pain was gone
A suicide from all the lies
For all the pain and unheard cries
And you couldn't take the guilt, so you took the poison too
Slowly went numb, and wrapped my arms around you
So when the police would come, it would be too late
Lies and deceit sealed both of our fate
I know that I'm crazy, and I know this isn't right
But my love, Clorox is, my drink of choice tonight. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 212 [topic] => 36 [informant] => TeenageEmoGirl [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
Bleach

Contributed by TeenageEmoGirl on Saturday, 26th July 2003 @ 12:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



I'll sip away on Chardonay
Along with a poison so sweet
Feed you all these stupid lines
Let you choke on your deceit.
Do you need some mouth to mouth my dear?
Well don't you worry, help is here.
So elegantly you've fallen into my trap
But wait a minute my lips are chap
Let me moisten them with poison
As you get ready for all of this
No time to prepare; your fate sealed with my kiss
Never thought this would be your death?
That you'd be looking at me, struggling for your last breath?
But I planned all this out, all the nights I cried
I dreamed of you to be by my side
Even if it ends up a double suicide
So here was the plan, you should know before you die
I was sick of being sad, sicking of yearning for your high
They'll all think you came over, found me dead on the floor
With a note next to my bed saying I just couldn't take it anymore
I couldn't take that you were out of my reach
So I took a bottle of wine and a gallon of bleach
Drank both until my fate was drawn
Drank until the pain was gone
A suicide from all the lies
For all the pain and unheard cries
And you couldn't take the guilt, so you took the poison too
Slowly went numb, and wrapped my arms around you
So when the police would come, it would be too late
Lies and deceit sealed both of our fate
I know that I'm crazy, and I know this isn't right
But my love, Clorox is, my drink of choice tonight.




Copyright © TeenageEmoGirl ... [ 2003-07-26 00:35:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Bleach (User Rating: 1 )
by Metalmouth666 on Saturday, 26th July 2003 @ 12:58:08 AM AEST
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oh hell what a lot of anger, but as sick as it may sound, I liked this poem. you just took all your S*** inside and let it out.
Suicide isn't fun my friend you hurt to many people in the end, just let life's hell take it's course and you'll eventually move on.


Re: Bleach (User Rating: 1 )
by loserkid on Saturday, 26th July 2003 @ 04:30:38 AM AEST
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wow im amazed this is rad i was just dating a suicidal girl and i was always afriad she would end it but she hasnt so yeah this poem is rad


Re: Bleach (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Saturday, 26th July 2003 @ 05:15:34 PM AEST
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this is absolutely incredible...i love it...sad but beautiful...wow...


Re: Bleach (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 30th July 2003 @ 06:02:50 AM AEST
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Now I told you I loved it when you showed me it on AIM, but I just have to say now...I love it even more. Amazing, absolutely amazing.


Re: Bleach (User Rating: 1 )
by Krazykaric on Wednesday, 30th July 2003 @ 04:24:28 PM AEST
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This was a very well written poem, however I am worried.. I hope that you wouldn't commit suicide and trick someone else into dieing, by trying to save you.




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