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Array ( [sid] => 20980 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Close To The Cliff [time] => 2003-07-25 19:35:00 [hometext] => I wrote this poem about a year and a half ago, during a particularly difficult period of my marriage. We were very close to divorcing.
We endured, and things are better than ever right now. [bodytext] => Pain stretches my spirit,
And rejection pushes me near a cliff.
I have always returned, but now the elastic is worn and tired.
I am scared of the cliff, yet it comforts me.
For the fear is in the fall
Not in the landing.
How do I balance what would be lost,
With what might be gained?
Is there gain in the loss?
Is there loss in the gain?
There is no breaking; time has dulled the pain.
Time has eroded passion and caring.
You can’t be close, when arms are folded,
Other arms are open, waiting and wondering.
I don’t want to fall! Rescue me!
Pull me back; return me to where I was happy.
My mind is weary, tired and unclear,
And my soul feels dark and lost.
I want what I had, and to be where I was.

[comments] => 5 [counter] => 209 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Dr_Calm [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Close To The Cliff

Contributed by Dr_Calm on Friday, 25th July 2003 @ 07:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



Pain stretches my spirit,
And rejection pushes me near a cliff.
I have always returned, but now the elastic is worn and tired.
I am scared of the cliff, yet it comforts me.
For the fear is in the fall
Not in the landing.
How do I balance what would be lost,
With what might be gained?
Is there gain in the loss?
Is there loss in the gain?
There is no breaking; time has dulled the pain.
Time has eroded passion and caring.
You can’t be close, when arms are folded,
Other arms are open, waiting and wondering.
I don’t want to fall! Rescue me!
Pull me back; return me to where I was happy.
My mind is weary, tired and unclear,
And my soul feels dark and lost.
I want what I had, and to be where I was.





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Re: Close To The Cliff (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Friday, 25th July 2003 @ 08:20:01 PM AEST
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very good write, I also have been close to the cliff, but things are much better now...you described the feeling so well

Shari


Re: Close To The Cliff (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Friday, 25th July 2003 @ 09:06:30 PM AEST
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Im sure so many readers will relete to this.You have touched on an expressed the very mixed emotions and fears of a failing love.I am so very happy you found your way back into the safety of her arms.
Very powerful.


Re: Close To The Cliff (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Friday, 25th July 2003 @ 10:28:13 PM AEST
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You have described this feeling so well... I was on that very cliff one year ago... Great write..
Jenni


Re: Close To The Cliff (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Saturday, 26th July 2003 @ 01:49:24 AM AEST
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Dr_Calm,
I'm so glad things have calmed down for you and you found your way back! I was one of the ones that had no other choice but to jump. But I didn't fall! I was able to get away in one piece. Your words were so eloquent. I really enjoyed reading your poem. Dr. Calm, infact, all of your poems.
lovingcritters
Connie


Re: Close To The Cliff (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 26th July 2003 @ 12:41:15 PM AEST
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Im glad to hear that you worked things out.We all know this cliff well. I to jumped off that cliff and now my life is wonderful.
michelle




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