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Array ( [sid] => 20924 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Last Breath [time] => 2003-07-24 22:05:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => The only thing that breaks my heart is death.
My friends` souls are so close to being put to rest.
But in this world of pain it seems to sleep is best,
so I never weep, my soul just becomes colder,
during this short longevity inside this conceited society Im only growin older and all the pain I see, it only makes me bolder,
only makes my will stronger,
I cant wait till this confusion is over.

Yet I wanna wake up and see the sun for one more time.
Thats why I wanna die and rise only in the sunshine,
laying in mah bed waitin for death's song to chyme.
And with my last breath I`ll tell tha Lord I truly tried,
And to my family caught up in these streets,
yea I know its too soon ta say goodbye.
Sisters please don`t cry,
Lanna and Mariah u two must always stick by eachothers side.
And to mah trusted friends strive for tha struggle to survive,
And to my "MOTHER"...thanks fo that 13 year lullabye,
Wasn`t there to see me grow, aren't here to see me rise,
But still I will watch thee from the sky.
To my fathers wife, my Momma,
I love you so much deep inside and even in death this love will grow,
And to my Father I hope you know that your are the only one that in the darkest times I could trust,
So I place u above all love.
Yea I know u tried, but u couldn`t shield me from the secrets of pain that this world tried to hide.

And as my blazing eyes grow blury, accepting my final fate, the last debate to where my soul will go,
The circumstances so scary, seems that all odds are against me, yet I see the bright light and Jesus with his arms out saying that finally I have arrived. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 177 [topic] => 43 [informant] => RealCrystal [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Last Breath

Contributed by RealCrystal on Thursday, 24th July 2003 @ 10:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

The only thing that breaks my heart is death.
My friends` souls are so close to being put to rest.
But in this world of pain it seems to sleep is best,
so I never weep, my soul just becomes colder,
during this short longevity inside this conceited society Im only growin older and all the pain I see, it only makes me bolder,
only makes my will stronger,
I cant wait till this confusion is over.

Yet I wanna wake up and see the sun for one more time.
Thats why I wanna die and rise only in the sunshine,
laying in mah bed waitin for death's song to chyme.
And with my last breath I`ll tell tha Lord I truly tried,
And to my family caught up in these streets,
yea I know its too soon ta say goodbye.
Sisters please don`t cry,
Lanna and Mariah u two must always stick by eachothers side.
And to mah trusted friends strive for tha struggle to survive,
And to my "MOTHER"...thanks fo that 13 year lullabye,
Wasn`t there to see me grow, aren't here to see me rise,
But still I will watch thee from the sky.
To my fathers wife, my Momma,
I love you so much deep inside and even in death this love will grow,
And to my Father I hope you know that your are the only one that in the darkest times I could trust,
So I place u above all love.
Yea I know u tried, but u couldn`t shield me from the secrets of pain that this world tried to hide.

And as my blazing eyes grow blury, accepting my final fate, the last debate to where my soul will go,
The circumstances so scary, seems that all odds are against me, yet I see the bright light and Jesus with his arms out saying that finally I have arrived.

Copyright © RealCrystal ... [ 2003-07-24 22:05:00]
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Re: Last Breath (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Friday, 25th July 2003 @ 12:32:31 AM AEST
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Bless your heartRealCrystal...Please pick up the phone and call the Hot-line. I might even answer your call! You need someone to talk to....someone not in your family, someone that is willing to hear your pain, and you're not having to worry about hurting them in process! Please call!
It's so very hard for young people today, but I promise you.....things will get better, but don't stop feeling along the way! Then you have become just like your enemy...no feelings at all!
I send you warm love and tight hugs.
loving critters
Connie Sue

Re: Last Breath (User Rating: 1 )
by Metalmouth666 on Friday, 25th July 2003 @ 02:10:38 AM AEST
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R.C.
this is a great write, it tells about the "you" inside that has come out. we younger generation have it hard, and we all wish for that "last breath" that we truely want to feel, and if you truely know jesus he always wants to see you, he just doesn't want to see you befor your time on earth is done, and he himself calls you home.
life is hard it really is, and I know this from the past. and many of my friends thought about that last breath too, but remember your actions effect those around you, weather or not you may think it, it does.
Don't strive for that last breath, it comes naturaly, it doesn't need help.
wishes for the best
~MetalMouth666 (Ryan)

Re: Last Breath (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Friday, 25th July 2003 @ 03:07:49 AM AEST
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This is truly touching.... my heart goes out to you....I do hope you will take Critter's advice...and seek help..
Love and Hugs
Jenni

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