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Array ( [sid] => 20889 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Leave Me Be [time] => 2003-07-24 10:35:00 [hometext] => i have no idea where in my mind this came from...not that good.. i think? im not really together at the moment [bodytext] => Quietly Step Into My Room Of Gloom
Cautiously Climb Over My Wall Of Self Pity
Meticulously Wade Your Way Thru My Apathy.

Don't Cause A Stir, The Slightest Distraction May Cause Me To Finish Myself Off

Look Into the Corner...
Do You Notice Anything There?
I Didn't Expect You Too
Nobody Ever Does.

Prepare Yourself And Look Again
Try Real Hard And Maybe Then You Might See...
See Me Savagely TeArIng And ClAwIng At My Own Flesh
Till My Hands Are Smothered In My Own Blood

And If You Don't See Me,
Open Your Ears And Open Your Mind
Because Maybe You Will HeAr Me...
Hear Me Praying On Bruised And Broken Knees
To Anyone and
Anything That Will Take Me Away From Myself

Salvage Yourself, Don't Stay Long
My Own Affliction May Be Contagious
Don't Try To Play Savior, I Can't Be Saved

Just Leave Me Be. . .
. . .Just Leave Me Be [comments] => 3 [counter] => 163 [topic] => 43 [informant] => deadly_blaZe [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Leave Me Be

Contributed by deadly_blaZe on Thursday, 24th July 2003 @ 10:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Quietly Step Into My Room Of Gloom
Cautiously Climb Over My Wall Of Self Pity
Meticulously Wade Your Way Thru My Apathy.

Don't Cause A Stir, The Slightest Distraction May Cause Me To Finish Myself Off

Look Into the Corner...
Do You Notice Anything There?
I Didn't Expect You Too
Nobody Ever Does.

Prepare Yourself And Look Again
Try Real Hard And Maybe Then You Might See...
See Me Savagely TeArIng And ClAwIng At My Own Flesh
Till My Hands Are Smothered In My Own Blood

And If You Don't See Me,
Open Your Ears And Open Your Mind
Because Maybe You Will HeAr Me...
Hear Me Praying On Bruised And Broken Knees
To Anyone and
Anything That Will Take Me Away From Myself

Salvage Yourself, Don't Stay Long
My Own Affliction May Be Contagious
Don't Try To Play Savior, I Can't Be Saved

Just Leave Me Be. . .
. . .Just Leave Me Be

Copyright © deadly_blaZe ... [ 2003-07-24 10:35:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Leave Me Be (User Rating: 1 )
by desertwispers on Thursday, 24th July 2003 @ 12:32:23 PM AEST
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so sad
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Re: Leave Me Be (User Rating: 1 )
by child_of_God on Thursday, 24th July 2003 @ 10:48:23 PM AEST
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good expression of your feelings. that's ok. :)

Re: Leave Me Be (User Rating: 1 )
by Ruby1987 on Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 01:52:37 PM AEST
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So very emotionally heart wrenching, love the sadness and depression

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