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Array ( [sid] => 20860 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Sand Castles [time] => 2003-07-23 22:05:00 [hometext] => sometimes when you keep getting pushed down... you have to keep going back to rebuild what was broken [bodytext] => Spending too much time, building these sand castles
By the waves
Only to be brought down, by relentless waves
All the time

The summer air deceives you, leaving you in high spirits
Only to be toppled down, by dark clouds

Fearless hands take to the sands, try to rebuild what has passed
Losing all faith to the waves, taken to the sea

The warm breeze builds you up, feeding you lies over truth
Leaving you thirsting for honesty, with little hope

Think I’ll spend some more time, rebuilding my sand castle
Try to keep the faith, hope for some brighter days
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Sand Castles

Contributed by Feelin_Like_A_Sadfellow on Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 10:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Spending too much time, building these sand castles
By the waves
Only to be brought down, by relentless waves
All the time

The summer air deceives you, leaving you in high spirits
Only to be toppled down, by dark clouds

Fearless hands take to the sands, try to rebuild what has passed
Losing all faith to the waves, taken to the sea

The warm breeze builds you up, feeding you lies over truth
Leaving you thirsting for honesty, with little hope

Think I’ll spend some more time, rebuilding my sand castle
Try to keep the faith, hope for some brighter days

Copyright Â© Feelin_Like_A_Sadfellow ... [ 2003-07-23 22:05:00]
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Re: Sand Castles (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Thursday, 24th July 2003 @ 12:37:18 AM AEST
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Great idea! Me too!Good poetry.
Christina

Re: Sand Castles (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Thursday, 24th July 2003 @ 04:26:09 AM AEST
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a beautiful write, great metaphor...i hope you always have this hope...thanx for sharing this one....you are wonderful...
hugs
kara

Re: Sand Castles (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 24th July 2003 @ 11:32:33 AM AEST
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this is beautiful keep building those sand castles!! thanks for bringing the ocean into my desert today.
lovely.
michelle

Re: Sand Castles (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 9th August 2003 @ 12:24:57 AM AEST
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life, what else can we do? i build sand castles too, indeed i am much like you, rerenovating my life; from tides passing through, hugs n' love nessa

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