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Array ( [sid] => 20826 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Painful Days [time] => 2003-07-23 06:05:00 [hometext] => Basically its simply my life..Sortof long tho, my life wont be...Please comment anything, good..bad..dont care [bodytext] => I love you, yet, I hate you
And still I cant stand to part
You mean so much to me
You're one missing piece to my heart,
A day with out you I nearly cant stand
When we meet again the feelings great
I'll never leave you, You cant leave me
With you I'll make my fate,
All the while you've been there for me
You cant possibly tell me any lie
You've been there when I needed you
And you will until I die,
For you are my knife
Your sharpness is the best
One of these days sometime soon
You'll be the one to put me at rest,
Not many understand this
Some do, and know it well
Some say they 'feel your pain'
To feel my pain you'd burn in hell,
Submitting to the urge to cut
Failing at suicide
Im sick of leading this excuse for life
I SHOULDVE ALREADY DIED,
Some people say Im afraid of living
Or that I have too much to live for
Oh really? Tell me what you know
Why I should stay here any more?
The bruises and cuts have been made
Upon my heart and mind
I want to end it, be happy for once
But that damn vein I cant seem to find,
Ive tried countless times
The bullet wont even seek my brain
From trying so very long ago
age 9; trying to end the pain,
Sad story no ones noticed this till now
I told my friends; they were there
I told my family; now I regret it
They made me this way and never cared,
So this is my wonderful life everyone
Though I wouldnt trade it for the world
I wouldnt know how to live the normal life
I'd rather die a broken girl... [comments] => 5 [counter] => 221 [topic] => 36 [informant] => PsychoticDreamz [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Painful Days

Contributed by PsychoticDreamz on Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 06:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

I love you, yet, I hate you
And still I cant stand to part
You mean so much to me
You're one missing piece to my heart,
A day with out you I nearly cant stand
When we meet again the feelings great
I'll never leave you, You cant leave me
With you I'll make my fate,
All the while you've been there for me
You cant possibly tell me any lie
You've been there when I needed you
And you will until I die,
For you are my knife
Your sharpness is the best
One of these days sometime soon
You'll be the one to put me at rest,
Not many understand this
Some do, and know it well
Some say they 'feel your pain'
To feel my pain you'd burn in hell,
Submitting to the urge to cut
Failing at suicide
Im sick of leading this excuse for life
I SHOULDVE ALREADY DIED,
Some people say Im afraid of living
Or that I have too much to live for
Oh really? Tell me what you know
Why I should stay here any more?
The bruises and cuts have been made
Upon my heart and mind
I want to end it, be happy for once
But that damn vein I cant seem to find,
Ive tried countless times
The bullet wont even seek my brain
From trying so very long ago
age 9; trying to end the pain,
Sad story no ones noticed this till now
I told my friends; they were there
I told my family; now I regret it
They made me this way and never cared,
So this is my wonderful life everyone
Though I wouldnt trade it for the world
I wouldnt know how to live the normal life
I'd rather die a broken girl...

Copyright © PsychoticDreamz ... [ 2003-07-23 06:05:00]
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Re: Painful Days (User Rating: 1 )
by Goebelclm73 on Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 06:32:46 AM AEST
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It takes a very strong person to say the things you have said in this poem, for that I commend you! I'm not going to sit here and say I totally understand everything you are feeling because I don't. Each situation is unique in it's on way, and we all as individuals feel certain things in very different ways. No two people are alike, which is what makes living worth while. I can however relate to some of the things you say here, and you should know that there ARE people who feel the same things. Often when we want to end our own lives it's because we feel we are all alone, but this couldn't be farther from the truth! Stay strong, find things you love and enjoy, and live for them....but above all, love yourself!
Good write!
Christopher

Re: Painful Days (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 10:11:02 AM AEST
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wow...i love this...the last four lines i can relate to very much, it's someting me and my best friend were talking about last night...wow...very good...sad...

Re: Painful Days (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 01:05:58 PM AEST
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this is sad. I wont say I can understand the entire thoughts and feeling of the poem but I have had many heartaches and hurts in my life. I hope that you can find that light inside you and let it shine.Ill pray for better and happeir days for you.
michelle

Re: Painful Days (User Rating: 1 )
by Kimmie_mac on Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 02:34:47 PM AEST
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I have felt some of what you have felt. I wrote it in a poem that is on this site called black. I wrote that poem in 97 and I am now glad that I did not go through with it. My life is better than it has ever been. I have to say I do like the poem. The way you wrote it and put your feelings down so well, but I hate the fact that you feel the way you do. It will change, someday. I am thinking about you as well as other people on this site. Kimmie_mac

Re: Painful Days (User Rating: 1 )
by dreadfulsuicide1570 on Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 04:07:12 PM AEST
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I know exactly how you feel and i can relate to what your feeling i know i am saying exactly what everyone else say i know how you feel or its gonna be okay but u just dont want it to be okay you want it to be over you would give anything to feel nothing to go to the days when you were a child and couldnt remember anything you'd do anything for that vein to just remain bleeding ...... i too have cut myself to make the pain ease but now its like i dont want it to ease i want it to die along with me...

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