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Array ( [sid] => 20799 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Un Loved alwayz [time] => 2003-07-22 18:35:00 [hometext] => I will always be unloved, no one cares fo rme, its not for attention, its the truth. [bodytext] => As the blodd drips from my arms,
as the pain goes through my heart,
I realize no one cares, sure they say they love me but anny one can tell you that,
I see my self as ugly, stupid and fat.
Im only 120 pounds but it feels like tons more.
Im such a bore, no one will ever love me, no one will ever see, the true me.
I look at the kinfe and cry realizing all the scares I made and made. but noe one cares or even dares to ask me if Im ok. Because Love I thought was once a dream come true, but I guess not. Its all lies. Like I said No one cares.
I guess this is the end of my life, my misery, why should I go on knowing I will be unloved
I slowly bring the razors to my arms giving my last words "I love you Mark" before I lay down and slowly fade away.... forever. I make a quick but deeps slash, deep enough to see my veins pop out of my skin
I lay down and slowly give in. Now I am sleepy and I wil rest. Like i said No one cares [comments] => 2 [counter] => 155 [topic] => 36 [informant] => UnLovedLittleSuicideGurl [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Un Loved alwayz

Contributed by UnLovedLittleSuicideGurl on Tuesday, 22nd July 2003 @ 06:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

As the blodd drips from my arms,
as the pain goes through my heart,
I realize no one cares, sure they say they love me but anny one can tell you that,
I see my self as ugly, stupid and fat.
Im only 120 pounds but it feels like tons more.
Im such a bore, no one will ever love me, no one will ever see, the true me.
I look at the kinfe and cry realizing all the scares I made and made. but noe one cares or even dares to ask me if Im ok. Because Love I thought was once a dream come true, but I guess not. Its all lies. Like I said No one cares.
I guess this is the end of my life, my misery, why should I go on knowing I will be unloved
I slowly bring the razors to my arms giving my last words "I love you Mark" before I lay down and slowly fade away.... forever. I make a quick but deeps slash, deep enough to see my veins pop out of my skin
I lay down and slowly give in. Now I am sleepy and I wil rest. Like i said No one cares

Copyright © UnLovedLittleSuicideGurl ... [ 2003-07-22 18:35:00]
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Re: Un Loved alwayz (User Rating: 1 )
by cant-skate on Tuesday, 22nd July 2003 @ 06:44:47 PM AEST
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I read the note u left and saw the knife ! i felt like it was through my heart and not ur arms !
we both are lonely we both are broke
i was too late to have a hug
i was one step too far from being loved
as i lay down beside you i wonder !
how can we know if someone really cares ! how we can he doesnt feel the same ?

Re: Un Loved alwayz (User Rating: 1 )
by krystal on Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 04:12:21 AM AEST
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My dear sweet girl, so much pain
but from that knife please do refrain
although it seems the pain won't end
it will in time, your heart will mend
it seems unbearable at this time
but your wounds will heal, you will find
someone does care, it's all of us here
just send a PM if you want an ear
to listen to help you get through all this strife
for noone is worth ending your life...

my thoughts and heart is with you my friend, if you want someone to talk to someone is always here to listen...Krystal

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