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Array ( [sid] => 20794 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Tune up [time] => 2003-07-22 16:05:00 [hometext] => just worming up [bodytext] => Shuffling the word
tuning up the chord
any gist that's found
must also go around.
Truth if tricky
mighty pricky
sticks to ya
if you ain't picky.
We all look
we all see
all we know
is how to grow
just to grow
Oooooowwwwww!
Old and up
up and old
feeble reasons
change like seasons
our biggest treasons
are by far our denials
so crying out loud
move that cloud
stand up proud
what's this about
not facing the truth
have no doubt
inside out
won't run out.
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Tune up

Contributed by vincy on Tuesday, 22nd July 2003 @ 04:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Shuffling the word
tuning up the chord
any gist that's found
must also go around.
Truth if tricky
mighty pricky
sticks to ya
if you ain't picky.
We all look
we all see
all we know
is how to grow
just to grow
Oooooowwwwww!
Old and up
up and old
feeble reasons
change like seasons
our biggest treasons
are by far our denials
so crying out loud
move that cloud
stand up proud
what's this about
not facing the truth
have no doubt
inside out
won't run out.

Copyright © vincy ... [ 2003-07-22 16:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Tune up (User Rating: 1 )
by yellow_sundragon on Tuesday, 22nd July 2003 @ 04:26:25 PM AEST
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*smiles* I like this, in an off-hand way it is SO profound. Thanks for sharing it.

*J*

Re: Tune up (User Rating: 1 )
by full_blur on Tuesday, 22nd July 2003 @ 04:49:11 PM AEST
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I agree with yellow_sundragon, this poem is deceptively taciturn from line-to-line but sends forth powerful message on flowing undercurrents

Re: Tune up (User Rating: 1 )
by tinka_belle on Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 08:01:11 AM AEST
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:)

Re: Tune up (User Rating: 1 )
by vincy on Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 04:37:56 PM AEST
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" flowing undercurrents ", acute observation Paul.
Sometimes, to the automatist poet the written word
is a revelation as the meaning manifests. My poem
"artiststatement" is about that. I take this as part of the exploration through words and meaning as life goes on.

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