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I'll never forget our last night.
There was something about you so different.
The love we just shared, wasn't right.

After the lovin' you held me,
The way you usually do.
But I could tell in my heart, dear,
Something was bothering you.

I looked into your dreamy eyes,
Saw no desire there.
Please tell me, dear heart of mine!
Does he no longer care?

With tears in your eyes, you told me.
You just didn't know what to do.
There was someone you had recently met,
And thought you loved her too.

Never, in my wildest dreams,
Did I doubt your love for me.
So now, you've found another,
And want me to set you free.

After my anger abated,
I kissed you tenderly.
This was the last kiss we shared,
While my tears flowed endlessly.

My life has been so miserable.
Miss you more than words can say.
Keep hoping and praying all the time,
That you'll come back some day.

But love is not a two way street.
Time will heal my sorrows.
My heart tells me I'll find love again,
And there'll be many better tomorrows.
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PAIN OF LOVE

Contributed by Del on Monday, 21st July 2003 @ 02:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

It's been a long time now, since you left me.
I'll never forget our last night.
There was something about you so different.
The love we just shared, wasn't right.

After the lovin' you held me,
The way you usually do.
But I could tell in my heart, dear,
Something was bothering you.

I looked into your dreamy eyes,
Saw no desire there.
Please tell me, dear heart of mine!
Does he no longer care?

With tears in your eyes, you told me.
You just didn't know what to do.
There was someone you had recently met,
And thought you loved her too.

Never, in my wildest dreams,
Did I doubt your love for me.
So now, you've found another,
And want me to set you free.

After my anger abated,
I kissed you tenderly.
This was the last kiss we shared,
While my tears flowed endlessly.

My life has been so miserable.
Miss you more than words can say.
Keep hoping and praying all the time,
That you'll come back some day.

But love is not a two way street.
Time will heal my sorrows.
My heart tells me I'll find love again,
And there'll be many better tomorrows.

Copyright © Del ... [ 2003-07-21 02:35:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: PAIN OF LOVE (User Rating: 1 )
by PoloRM on Monday, 21st July 2003 @ 03:06:38 AM AEST
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Love can be a stealer
For happiness it takes
But Time is a healer
When Life's at stakes.

Another love you'll soon find
For your body, your heart and your mind. =)

Re: PAIN OF LOVE (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Monday, 21st July 2003 @ 04:50:10 PM AEST
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Ouch..this is so sad, Del..but so beautifully written. I wish you all the best in your life..
Jenni

Re: PAIN OF LOVE (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Monday, 21st July 2003 @ 05:03:15 PM AEST
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Ouch..this is so sad, Del..but so beautifully written. I wish you all the best in your life..
Jenni

Re: PAIN OF LOVE (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 22nd July 2003 @ 02:10:14 AM AEST
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heartbreaking but well written. You will find the right one.
michelle

Re: PAIN OF LOVE (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Tuesday, 22nd July 2003 @ 06:21:20 AM AEST
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i am sure you will find the right one, good write

Shari

Re: PAIN OF LOVE (User Rating: 1 )
by Hades on Monday, 31st January 2011 @ 03:25:12 PM AEST
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GREAT write, it's so painfully true. And as I always say; "When all the chips are down, you'll be the one to collect"

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