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Array ( [sid] => 20731 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Indiffrence [time] => 2003-07-20 16:35:00 [hometext] => I have never submitted anything before. any comments would be appreciated. [bodytext] => Walking,shoulders squared,chin high
I entered your room
Oblivious to my tears
You asked how my day was
As I ranted
You nodded
As I questioned
You shrugged
The fire blazed behind my eyes
I could think only of screaming
If I did..
Finally let one out
Shake the windows
Rattle the walls
Would you turn-
-to see
If it was only my heart breaking,
Or had I seen your indifference for me? [comments] => 7 [counter] => 184 [topic] => 48 [informant] => yesterdaysfool [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Indiffrence

Contributed by yesterdaysfool on Sunday, 20th July 2003 @ 04:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Walking,shoulders squared,chin high
I entered your room
Oblivious to my tears
You asked how my day was
As I ranted
You nodded
As I questioned
You shrugged
The fire blazed behind my eyes
I could think only of screaming
If I did..
Finally let one out
Shake the windows
Rattle the walls
Would you turn-
-to see
If it was only my heart breaking,
Or had I seen your indifference for me?

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Re: Indiffrence (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Sunday, 20th July 2003 @ 05:05:42 PM AEST
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Warm welcome to YPDC yesterdayfool.
This is a great write...beautifully done. Keep up the good work! Waiting to read more from you.
Saira

Re: Indiffrence (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Sunday, 20th July 2003 @ 05:13:25 PM AEST
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Welcome to ypdc..... this is a brilliantly written piece.. one I can relate to..
Hope to see lots more soon...
Jenni

Re: Indiffrence (User Rating: 1 )
by norm on Sunday, 20th July 2003 @ 05:22:18 PM AEST
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I liked your poem alot...What's interesting,
nothing 'given' says if your male or female

Re: Indiffrence (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Sunday, 20th July 2003 @ 06:22:17 PM AEST
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Welcome, wonderful write, strong read..looking forward to more
Shari

Re: Indiffrence (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Sunday, 20th July 2003 @ 07:32:54 PM AEST
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Loved this ... can relate very well ... very well written ... Jan

Re: Indiffrence (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Sunday, 20th July 2003 @ 11:07:16 PM AEST
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welcome to YPDC!! I can relate to this write for sure. Did a great job here will be watching 4 u!!
Michelle

Re: Indiffrence (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 01:20:46 AM AEST
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very good work, Crow

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