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Array ( [sid] => 2070 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Invitation [time] => 2002-08-09 12:42:36 [hometext] => This was that little note card I made and gave to my hearts desire. Perhaps he didn't know how to respond or I overwhelmed him, or he just took the last line and decided not to say anything. As to what I wrote in a write I just posted last week, about "I Believe in Falling in Love (even when you fail)" I guess I either have to be patient, or he did take the last line of not saying anything. Don't ask me why I ever put that there, it was stupid, I really thought I might have gotten response from him. Now he he barely talks to me, let alone, look at me. I beleive I must of messed up. so this was my last way of ever doing this kind of thing again. ...... I know I just feel I made a mistake and feel now I did something wrong. [bodytext] => Remembering all one can say and do
Is quite a bit for one to understand too.
With the rules of today,
I am not sure of what is right or wrong?
I just know I am still a little conservative, that’s ok
Will do better in rhyme to convey my song!
I want to know you better, be a part
Of what you are, share in your heart
If friends only we be
Then that’s ok, no pressure by me
If friendship should go more
Then I know feeling the way I do
You are already special, for that open door
My dear, my heart wants to touch you
Physically, emotionally and all the way thru
Please forgive my foolish ramblings of the other day
Just my heart trying to say
How much I really care, and do want to get to know you
If you’re interested, you know what to do
If I don’t hear from you,
I am still ok with that too.
Love,
Always
Amber Rose




Amber Rose Yeager – July 29, 2002
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 230 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Rose [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Invitation

Contributed by Rose on Friday, 9th August 2002 @ 12:42:36 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Remembering all one can say and do
Is quite a bit for one to understand too.
With the rules of today,
I am not sure of what is right or wrong?
I just know I am still a little conservative, that’s ok
Will do better in rhyme to convey my song!
I want to know you better, be a part
Of what you are, share in your heart
If friends only we be
Then that’s ok, no pressure by me
If friendship should go more
Then I know feeling the way I do
You are already special, for that open door
My dear, my heart wants to touch you
Physically, emotionally and all the way thru
Please forgive my foolish ramblings of the other day
Just my heart trying to say
How much I really care, and do want to get to know you
If you’re interested, you know what to do
If I don’t hear from you,
I am still ok with that too.
Love,
Always
Amber Rose




Amber Rose Yeager – July 29, 2002




Copyright © Rose ... [ 2002-08-09 12:42:36]
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Re: Invitation (User Rating: 1 )
by ginsdance on Friday, 9th August 2002 @ 02:39:20 PM AEST
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I don't think you did anything wrong... men just can be stubborn about love sometimes. If he's decided to avoid you at the moment then that's his loss... he'll regret it!!!! They always do. Great write Amber! He'll come around!!!
Ginsdance


Re: Invitation (User Rating: 1 )
by Unaekseveer1 on Friday, 9th August 2002 @ 09:56:43 PM AEST
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Hi Amber, I've just watched on Discovery a documentary about the way us humans deal with our emotions. There's apparently not a great deal we can do about it, it takes our male brains (or lack of ;-) seven times as long as you females to process emotional data! So please give him time, don't give up, and don't be embarrased into silence about expressing your feelings! He will get it, eventually! If he dosen't then he wasn't who you thought, so you've lost nothing, really!
"Patience" (W. Axl Rose'88)!
With love
Dean




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