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[title] => I've lost my Muse
[time] => 2003-07-19 20:35:00
[hometext] => I seem to have been so busy with writing comments and forum replies that I have hardly written any poetry at all.
So I picked up my "pen" and called my muse
She'd left a message
[bodytext] => "So where've you been, what's your excuse
you have not called upon your muse
you have not asked for inspired views
from which you could a verse infuse
Well tough! .....I've just gone on a cruise
to Instanbul and Syracuse
to meet old friends, to pay my dues
and get the latest poet's news
And no...I'm making no excuse
I care not what outcome ensues
you did your lovely muse abuse
and all without a good excuse
Stuck for words? got none to use?
no joke? no plot? no clever ruse?
nothing there that will amuse?
poor old Wrybod got the blues?
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I've lost my Muse
Contributed by
wrybod
on
Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 08:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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"So where've you been, what's your excuse
you have not called upon your muse
you have not asked for inspired views
from which you could a verse infuse
Well tough! .....I've just gone on a cruise
to Instanbul and Syracuse
to meet old friends, to pay my dues
and get the latest poet's news
And no...I'm making no excuse
I care not what outcome ensues
you did your lovely muse abuse
and all without a good excuse
Stuck for words? got none to use?
no joke? no plot? no clever ruse?
nothing there that will amuse?
poor old Wrybod got the blues?
Copyright ©
wrybod
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2003-07-19 20:35:00]
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Re: I've lost my Muse
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 08:39:43 PM AEST
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great I will be sure to treat my Muse right
Shari |
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Re: I've lost my Muse
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by vincy on
Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 10:41:22 PM AEST
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no you haven't.
Pretty inspirational considering
that fooling around with words
is what takes to amuse the muse. |
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Re: I've lost my Muse
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 11:23:27 PM AEST
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| oh i love this poem!!! adorable and wow great!!! hehe muses those muses lol, big special hug for this one!!! love nessa x |
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Re: I've lost my Muse
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 11:58:51 PM AEST
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Oh Wrybod...this poem really rocks!! I love it!!
You have not lost a thing...
Jenni |
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Re: I've lost my Muse
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by DreamWeaver on
Sunday, 20th July 2003 @ 03:27:31 AM AEST
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| Very witty and enjoyable poem, wrybod ... was wondering where you'd gotten to ... Jan |
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Re: I've lost my Muse
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by Saira on
Sunday, 20th July 2003 @ 07:50:26 AM AEST
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Wow! This is a very sweet poem. Enjoyed reading it. Lost? uh-nay, doesn't seem so...
Waiting to read more from you!
Saira |
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Re: I've lost my Muse
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by Wrybod on
Monday, 21st July 2003 @ 05:34:54 AM AEST
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| Shari we'd all be lost without them. |
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Re: I've lost my Muse
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by Wrybod on
Monday, 21st July 2003 @ 05:35:13 AM AEST
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| Shari we'd all be lost without them. |
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Re: I've lost my Muse
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by Wrybod on
Monday, 21st July 2003 @ 05:42:48 AM AEST
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| Shari we'd all be lost without them. |
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Re: I've lost my Muse
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by Wrybod on
Tuesday, 22nd July 2003 @ 02:45:39 AM AEST
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My muse is not a happy one
she has her little ways
and sometimes almost nothing comes
for days and days and days |
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Re: I've lost my Muse
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by Wrybod on
Tuesday, 22nd July 2003 @ 02:50:29 AM AEST
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| Wow a x, It wasn't that good! |
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Re: I've lost my Muse
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by Wrybod on
Tuesday, 22nd July 2003 @ 02:58:15 AM AEST
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| I was getting desperate!!!!! |
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Re: I've lost my Muse
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by Wrybod on
Tuesday, 22nd July 2003 @ 03:01:27 AM AEST
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| Jan every now and then I seem to reach a mental desert. |
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Re: I've lost my Muse
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by Wrybod on
Tuesday, 22nd July 2003 @ 03:07:12 AM AEST
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| I'll do my best. |
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Re: I've lost my Muse
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by Wrybod on
Tuesday, 22nd July 2003 @ 03:07:15 AM AEST
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| I'll do my best. |
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Re: I've lost my Muse
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 22nd July 2003 @ 05:53:05 AM AEST
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| My old friend wrybod never misused his muse. He is the most respected poet of wisdom on this site..wrybod!.. you can wield your blazing sword again... venkat |
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Re: I've lost my Muse
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by Wrybod on
Tuesday, 22nd July 2003 @ 11:53:46 AM AEST
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Well thank you Ven
I'll try again
to fight the fight
with humble pen |
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Re: I've lost my Muse
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 07:38:11 AM AEST
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| Good..I can understand my dear friend..venkat |
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Re: I've lost my Muse
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by norm on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 04:04:58 PM AEST
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We all know the feeling
That sends us areeling,
We end a thought and then,
Like we'll never write again,
Must be like the thought of divorce
You can't go on (from a dubious source)
In both cases I think as quick as a wink
Brush yourself off and get back on the horse...
Keed going, my friend,
It is never the end... |
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Re: I've lost my Muse
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by Wrybod on
Thursday, 24th July 2003 @ 03:30:49 AM AEST
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I guess it is the crunch of things
when now and then a bunch of things
all come together to conspire
a lack of normal "boiler fire"
I seemed to have no head of steam
no peace and quiet in which to dream
no energy to make me tick
and feeling proper poorly sick
Well now I've sorted out my ills
a day in bed, a box of pills
encouragement from all my friends
I'll set myself to make ammends.
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Re: I've lost my Muse
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by karoody on
Saturday, 26th July 2003 @ 11:30:07 AM AEST
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i believe your muse just needed a rest cause your words always seem to challenge one into thought...great write...i've missed your poetry
kara |
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Re: I've lost my Muse
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by Wrybod on
Sunday, 27th July 2003 @ 02:06:26 AM AEST
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| Thank you Kara. I have had a few other problems (medical) but all OK now so hope to be back on form and reading more of yours and other authors too. |
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Re: I've lost my Muse
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by ShadowsCloud on
Sunday, 27th July 2003 @ 02:39:47 PM AEST
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great poem. I know how it feels when it seems that your muse has left you. Good to see that yours is back. I love this poem.
ShadowsCloud |
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Re: I've lost my Muse
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by Wrybod on
Sunday, 17th August 2003 @ 04:03:40 PM AEST
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I don't know how I missed replying to this comment. Glad you liked the poem thanks.
bob
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Re: I've lost my Muse
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by Merry on
Wednesday, 1st October 2003 @ 02:54:11 AM AEST
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you are a very clever fellow
i think your muse is just pulling your leg
merry |
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