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Array ( [sid] => 20681 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => cruying my rain [time] => 2003-07-19 17:05:00 [hometext] => i am suffering the tears,yet the raining spears, crashing at my heart, falling down all apart,still loving you but you hated me from the start. [bodytext] => i am cruying my rain
suffering the fire pain
every drop going fain
eveng out of vain


explode out of reality
it became a atom trajedy
i couldin't feel my heart or see
it's going into the love history
stored in my heart where you can be
locked up emotions but you have the key
come back to me
enough this it's painfull not lovley


the distance never matters
we can be best lovers
just like the others
sharing love and never bothers
steps in the life taking covers


can you eveng feel my sol
ript off and allways fall
thinking about every word there all

they where more then gold
but my shape you have stoled
so scared and feeling cold
not a single emotion still stored


couldin't go on without this
get off my heart pain what is this
i'm denied with blue lips


it really hurt me deeper then any feeling
it was totaly choking and breathing
i was tossed out with blooding
craked up and nervous beating


but i will never forget you
i'm still loving you
be my girl and i will do the same to


[comments] => 2 [counter] => 172 [topic] => 32 [informant] => wassim [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
cruying my rain

Contributed by wassim on Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 05:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



i am cruying my rain
suffering the fire pain
every drop going fain
eveng out of vain


explode out of reality
it became a atom trajedy
i couldin't feel my heart or see
it's going into the love history
stored in my heart where you can be
locked up emotions but you have the key
come back to me
enough this it's painfull not lovley


the distance never matters
we can be best lovers
just like the others
sharing love and never bothers
steps in the life taking covers


can you eveng feel my sol
ript off and allways fall
thinking about every word there all

they where more then gold
but my shape you have stoled
so scared and feeling cold
not a single emotion still stored


couldin't go on without this
get off my heart pain what is this
i'm denied with blue lips


it really hurt me deeper then any feeling
it was totaly choking and breathing
i was tossed out with blooding
craked up and nervous beating


but i will never forget you
i'm still loving you
be my girl and i will do the same to






Copyright © wassim ... [ 2003-07-19 17:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: cruying my rain (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 05:41:56 PM AEST
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ooh...this is really, really good...sad...i love it though...


Re: cruying my rain (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 06:55:06 PM AEST
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So much pain and full of sadness...feelings so vivid. Good work!
Saira




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