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Array ( [sid] => 20680 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Contradicton [time] => 2003-07-19 16:35:00 [hometext] => Don't know if I like the title. Don't know if I even like the poem. I haven't written anything in months and I spit this out in about 15 minutes, so if it's not up to par with my other work, forgive me. But I really don't care. [bodytext] => Say you’re in love with me
When I believe it, fight and scream
Tell me you want to be with me
Then say marrying him’s your dream
Show me all I’ve ever wanted
Then take it all away
Say I’m the wind beneath your wings
But with him you’re going to stay
Spend each day knowing I’m yours
But never allow yourself to be mine
Tell me how much you miss me
But to see me, you have no time
Accept my heart and all my love
Then in an instant set me free
Tell me I’m all you’ve ever wanted
But you no longer have feelings for me
Keep asking me to wait for you
Then suddenly force me to leave
Tell me I have to trust in you
Then constantly lie and deceive
Tell others you compared me to him
You say I win on all counts
Tell me you want more for yourself
But decide you’d rather be without
Tell me how much I mean to you
But walk away from me with ease
Fill my heart and soul with passion
Then drop me to my knees
Speak to me of our future and love
But never recall your words
Tell me how you’ve always wanted me here
But leave my future blurred
Tell me that I might be the one
But give yourself no chance to see
Fill my heart with increasing desire
Then leave me here, alone and empty
Take all I’ve ever given you
As long as there’s no cost
Make love to me late one night
Then the very next day, we’re lost
Stand by me as I build my life around you
Encouraging me along the way
Then leave me stripped of my will to live
As I watch my only dream fade away
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Contradicton

Contributed by misterright on Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 04:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes



Say you’re in love with me
When I believe it, fight and scream
Tell me you want to be with me
Then say marrying him’s your dream
Show me all I’ve ever wanted
Then take it all away
Say I’m the wind beneath your wings
But with him you’re going to stay
Spend each day knowing I’m yours
But never allow yourself to be mine
Tell me how much you miss me
But to see me, you have no time
Accept my heart and all my love
Then in an instant set me free
Tell me I’m all you’ve ever wanted
But you no longer have feelings for me
Keep asking me to wait for you
Then suddenly force me to leave
Tell me I have to trust in you
Then constantly lie and deceive
Tell others you compared me to him
You say I win on all counts
Tell me you want more for yourself
But decide you’d rather be without
Tell me how much I mean to you
But walk away from me with ease
Fill my heart and soul with passion
Then drop me to my knees
Speak to me of our future and love
But never recall your words
Tell me how you’ve always wanted me here
But leave my future blurred
Tell me that I might be the one
But give yourself no chance to see
Fill my heart with increasing desire
Then leave me here, alone and empty
Take all I’ve ever given you
As long as there’s no cost
Make love to me late one night
Then the very next day, we’re lost
Stand by me as I build my life around you
Encouraging me along the way
Then leave me stripped of my will to live
As I watch my only dream fade away




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Re: Contradicton (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 06:30:06 PM AEST
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I really never got to read you old stuff, will have to go back and check it out. This was good and very close to home.

Shari


Re: Contradicton (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 07:02:48 PM AEST
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This one is surely a very good poem. Well done!
Saira


Re: Contradicton (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 07:11:41 PM AEST
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Excellent write ... perfect expression of a devastating situation ... one I understand very well ... Jan


Re: Contradicton (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Sunday, 20th July 2003 @ 02:09:58 AM AEST
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Curtis, this poem rocks!!!! You certainly have not lost your touch... Great write of such a sad situation..
Thanks for your earlier comment to my poem about being in the same boat.... I left you a message there....
Hugs from an old pal..
Jenni




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