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Array ( [sid] => 20675 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Pagan love make widows [time] => 2003-07-19 14:05:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Thy dawn rises from her tomb
Where silence is loud
Praying for the moon
Who is shining from the cloud.

Breaking waves announce my Bride
It’s the only way the sea could sing.

At the moon mountain six wolves cry
And kneel for thy glory and Thee …

The somber hill you re staying in
Is now defined
And your star had started to shine

The sun , the moon and the stars
Resigned giving you the only
Right to shine …

Above your head lays a star
In your heart is buried the jewel
Of a serpent who wished to die …

In your neck an open wound
To spawn life into our love
And to feed the creatures of our world …

Queen of all my sleepless nights
For whose beauty I, faun
Have played my pipes with heart.

Queen in white silk,
Skin like milk
Horns of faun, lips of dawn
Come to me, step forward into my nakedness,
Caress me in your breasts of fire .

Breed my flame, have no fear or weakness,
I welcome you in my hole of desires.

Daylight has broken into a strange
Nostalgia
Night tired candles, seem like two lovers,
Melt in an embrace of conspiracy.

Between us there is this strange Chemistry
“ But would you die for me? “

Beautiful dagger you may
Leave your case now …
Wild red tears at the lady’s hand
Kiss where her breasts with your sharpened
Face …
Given is now what love has taken;
Death and love, they dance together …

-HICHAM-
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Pagan love make widows

Contributed by cant-skate on Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 02:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: sarcasticpoetry



Thy dawn rises from her tomb
Where silence is loud
Praying for the moon
Who is shining from the cloud.

Breaking waves announce my Bride
It’s the only way the sea could sing.

At the moon mountain six wolves cry
And kneel for thy glory and Thee …

The somber hill you re staying in
Is now defined
And your star had started to shine

The sun , the moon and the stars
Resigned giving you the only
Right to shine …

Above your head lays a star
In your heart is buried the jewel
Of a serpent who wished to die …

In your neck an open wound
To spawn life into our love
And to feed the creatures of our world …

Queen of all my sleepless nights
For whose beauty I, faun
Have played my pipes with heart.

Queen in white silk,
Skin like milk
Horns of faun, lips of dawn
Come to me, step forward into my nakedness,
Caress me in your breasts of fire .

Breed my flame, have no fear or weakness,
I welcome you in my hole of desires.

Daylight has broken into a strange
Nostalgia
Night tired candles, seem like two lovers,
Melt in an embrace of conspiracy.

Between us there is this strange Chemistry
“ But would you die for me? “

Beautiful dagger you may
Leave your case now …
Wild red tears at the lady’s hand
Kiss where her breasts with your sharpened
Face …
Given is now what love has taken;
Death and love, they dance together …

-HICHAM-




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Re: Pagan love make widows (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 02:57:59 PM AEST
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"Beautiful dagger you may
Leave your case now …
Wild red tears at the lady’s hand
Kiss where her breasts with your sharpened
Face …
Given is now what love has taken;
Death and love, they dance together … "

great ending... reminiscent of Macbeth in some ways... great job... hope to see more from you.


Re: Pagan love make widows (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 04:22:48 PM AEST
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beautiful...


Re: Pagan love make widows (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 06:40:22 PM AEST
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intriquing and quite lovely write
Shari


Re: Pagan love make widows (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 11:01:25 PM AEST
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vividly beautiful, love this:) hugs n' love nessa


Re: Pagan love make widows (User Rating: 1 )
by cant-skate on Sunday, 20th July 2003 @ 05:01:35 AM AEST
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10x :D Hugs and kisses back !
There is nothin in this life that is more beautiful than a kiss that took a second to reach the heart ~ c you


Re: Pagan love make widows (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Sunday, 20th July 2003 @ 07:32:48 AM AEST
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"The sun , the moon and the stars
Resigned giving you the only
Right to shine …"

I love it!! Excellent!! I'll be keeping my eye on you... ;)

~ Moonlit


Re: Pagan love make widows (User Rating: 1 )
by cant-skate on Sunday, 20th July 2003 @ 11:57:41 AM AEST
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10x alot everyone ! hope u keep readin my new posts and hope i ll never disapoint anyone ! bye




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