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there was a lonely girl
and behind her loney eyes
there was a beautiful smile
her soul was full of heartache
and her heart full of pain

one day she fell in love
and she let herself become too nieve
his love was too sweet

it hurt her soul
cause she couldnt let go
all the walls were caving in
and she couldnt stop her suffering

once upon a time
there was a lonely girl
who took her life one day
she didnt think his love wa there
so she ended the stoory her way [comments] => 3 [counter] => 213 [topic] => 36 [informant] => dreadfulsuicide1570 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

A dark Fairytale

Contributed by dreadfulsuicide1570 on Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 12:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

once upon a time
there was a lonely girl
and behind her loney eyes
there was a beautiful smile
her soul was full of heartache
and her heart full of pain

one day she fell in love
and she let herself become too nieve
his love was too sweet

it hurt her soul
cause she couldnt let go
all the walls were caving in
and she couldnt stop her suffering

once upon a time
there was a lonely girl
who took her life one day
she didnt think his love wa there
so she ended the stoory her way

Copyright © dreadfulsuicide1570 ... [ 2003-07-19 12:05:00]
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Re: A dark Fairytale (User Rating: 1 )
by hardcoreputa on Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 01:26:02 PM AEST
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wow another excellent poem... but so sad... you are a great poet who has been through hard times... if u ever want to talk u can pm me... anyways this poem expressed a lot of your feelings and its good that you can share them here ~Apryl

Re: A dark Fairytale (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 07:18:08 PM AEST
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well written but too bad she ended the story so soon...for around the bend may have been someone more true

Shari

Re: A dark Fairytale (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Monday, 21st July 2003 @ 12:42:55 AM AEST
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such a sad write, Crow

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