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Array ( [sid] => 20658 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => ouch [time] => 2003-07-19 05:35:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => You bite me
With minced words
Vinegar kisses
From angry lips

You hurt me
With unkind stares
Flaccid embraces
From indifferent arms

You confuse me
With biased tones
Bittersweet pinches
From accusing fingers

You gouge me
With hateful thoughts
Puncturing dialogue
From uncaring eyes

You ignore me
With stubborn images
Ice-cold responses
From unforgiving tongues

You sadden me
With blunt statements
Tainted voices
From unyielding hearts

(you love me
or so you say you do)

7-9-2003
[comments] => 7 [counter] => 234 [topic] => 32 [informant] => LadyDama [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

ouch

Contributed by LadyDama on Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 05:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

You bite me
With minced words
Vinegar kisses
From angry lips

You hurt me
With unkind stares
Flaccid embraces
From indifferent arms

You confuse me
With biased tones
Bittersweet pinches
From accusing fingers

You gouge me
With hateful thoughts
Puncturing dialogue
From uncaring eyes

You ignore me
With stubborn images
Ice-cold responses
From unforgiving tongues

You sadden me
With blunt statements
Tainted voices
From unyielding hearts

(you love me
or so you say you do)

7-9-2003

Copyright © LadyDama ... [ 2003-07-19 05:35:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: ouch (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 05:41:00 AM AEST
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very painful my dear friend..venkat

Re: ouch (User Rating: 1 )
by krystal on Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 06:06:21 AM AEST
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Ouch indeed, yet through your pain you wrote about it so 'beautifully'...I can remember a time when I too had someone who made me feel this way...he said he loved me (along with every other woman). I moved on from him and the pain, and I am a much better person because of it. Thank you for sharing, I truly enjoyed this wonderful write...

Re: ouch (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 07:29:29 AM AEST
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Yep, been there. You explain it well.

~ Moonlit

Re: ouch (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 08:50:01 AM AEST
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Excellent write ... I relate to this so well ... Jan

Re: ouch (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 10:42:53 AM AEST
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This makes me sad. I know these feelings well. Your to sweet for this kind of treatment!! If you need to talk pm me or email ok?(Ill send you more furbaby pictures to give you a smile k?)
michelle

Re: ouch (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 11:32:22 AM AEST
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great write, but awww!! big warm hug!!! love nessa

Re: ouch (User Rating: 1 )
by Wrybod on Friday, 19th September 2003 @ 11:08:50 AM AEST
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Oh Michele, will we ever see you again?

Not this you, but the one we used to know

This poem is tragic,painful, but not without your consumate skill

I came looking for you, miss you, hope things get better

bob

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