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Array ( [sid] => 20656 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => subtle pushing [time] => 2003-07-19 04:35:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => if You hate me
let me go
if it’s over
say it’s so
if You can’t
take one more day
then pack my bags
no more play

if You like me
we’ll be friends
if You care
we’ll meet the ends
if You can
still smile at me
we’ll raise our daughter
separately

if You love me
You must act fast
don’t let me leave
please make this last
for once I’m gone
I’m gone for good
You know this well
You know I could

(You helped me the last time
You know I would)

7/14/03
[comments] => 5 [counter] => 191 [topic] => 21 [informant] => LadyDama [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
subtle pushing

Contributed by LadyDama on Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 04:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



if You hate me
let me go
if it’s over
say it’s so
if You can’t
take one more day
then pack my bags
no more play

if You like me
we’ll be friends
if You care
we’ll meet the ends
if You can
still smile at me
we’ll raise our daughter
separately

if You love me
You must act fast
don’t let me leave
please make this last
for once I’m gone
I’m gone for good
You know this well
You know I could

(You helped me the last time
You know I would)

7/14/03




Copyright © LadyDama ... [ 2003-07-19 04:35:00]
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Re: subtle pushing (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 04:39:46 AM AEST
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Life is always a play of light and shadows.. wish you the best. venkat


Re: subtle pushing (User Rating: 1 )
by Asatru on Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 05:27:29 AM AEST
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Real good write. Hope you both raise the child, It's real hard without a father in your life. Peace be with you.


Re: subtle pushing (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 10:45:11 AM AEST
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I hope things work out in the manner thats best for you and your happiness !!
michelle


Re: subtle pushing (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 05:36:18 PM AEST
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this is really good...sad...i hope it works out :)


Re: subtle pushing (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 20th July 2003 @ 10:38:11 PM AEST
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awww, i hope all works out for you, this seems a determined and positive poem, hugs n' love nessa




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