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And floods the eyes.The ruddy flame within
Turns frosty blue and hardens against the din
Of senseless strife that deep within us start.
Ah, winter greets us round the bend. Friends part
Like strangers even before the cold sets in.
And words that fly from lips grown pale and thin
Like arrows,poison-tipped, they sting and dart!
Then comes the final wave of hands that cleave
The rancid air. And chasms dropping sheer
Devour the ground from under lover's feet.
The frigid tears embossed in ice deceive
So well that now the act of loving's mere
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ICE

Contributed by Sanju on Friday, 18th July 2003 @ 11:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

A sudden burst of feeling batters the heart
And floods the eyes.The ruddy flame within
Turns frosty blue and hardens against the din
Of senseless strife that deep within us start.
Ah, winter greets us round the bend. Friends part
Like strangers even before the cold sets in.
And words that fly from lips grown pale and thin
Like arrows,poison-tipped, they sting and dart!
Then comes the final wave of hands that cleave
The rancid air. And chasms dropping sheer
Devour the ground from under lover's feet.
The frigid tears embossed in ice deceive
So well that now the act of loving's mere
Display of flowers thrown round an idol's feet

Copyright © Sanju ... [ 2003-07-18 23:35:00]
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Re: ICE (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 03:55:37 AM AEST
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"And words that fly from lips grown pale and thin ..Like arrows,poison-tipped, they sting and dart!...Then comes the final wave of hands that cleave"
"The frigid tears embossed in ice deceive
So well that now the act of loving's mere
Display of flowers thrown round an idol's feet"
these are heart touching lines...
good poetry. venkat

Re: ICE (User Rating: 1 )
by Sanju on Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 05:44:32 AM AEST
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Dear Venkat,
Thanks a lot. I am eagerly looking foward to hearing more about you.

Re: ICE (User Rating: 1 )
by krystal on Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 06:21:58 AM AEST
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Sanju your imagery is superb. You make the reader feel your words, not just read them. This is a truly exceptional write, loved it.

Re: ICE (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 08:28:52 AM AEST
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Sanju.. I am one of the best writers on this site. I am from hyderabad..a well established T.V serial & Drama writer.. started to write in english to spread our ancient Vedic & spiritual wisdom through out the world..that is my goal. but I too write on various subjects to attract readers.. and to vent my feelings also....I am 52 years of age...presently in A.P govt service..
when ever you want any advice on any thing. fell free to talk with me..
Blessings...venkat

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