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Array ( [sid] => 2063 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Lost [time] => 2002-08-09 12:27:16 [hometext] => [bodytext] => take a look inside my world, i don't know what's the matter with me
can't you see my reality is that what i don't want it to be
every anomaly on top of me keeps coming up from my past
just as i run into the present now i hope it doesn't last
i need to speak, can't talk the words
i have a move, can't walk this nerve
i want to think, can't seem to learn
and when i blink, the scene has changed
i'm losing everything...
so when i think i'm coming in...
walking inside my home and i don't know
where in the world i have been

this is the superstition i never thought i'd believe
brand new notion that nothing will be alright
feels like something is keeping me holding me back
like a chain to my mouth that threw me off track

i read the book and i took a look on "your problems: how to solve them"
if it were up to me immediately i would like them to be forgotten
but i can't stop them here they come, no more today am i done
don't look at me like this is fun when i can't breathe under the sun
i need to rest, can't take some sleep
i have a crave, can't begin to eat
i want to look, can't seem to see
and when i blink, the scene has changed
i'm losing everything...
so when i think i'm coming in...
walking inside my room and finding soon
i don't know where i have been

this is the superstition i never thought i'd believe
brand new notion that nothing will be alright
feels like something is keeping me holding me back
like a chain to my mouth that threw me off track
this is the superstition you think i could recieve
ancient notion that nothing to me feels right
feels like something is keeping me holding me back
like a chain to my mouth that threw me off track

the day sets down
coming off a paranoia holding part of me
and i lay down
shutting eyes ignoring lies trying to hold me
this is the superstition...
a brand new motion...
it feels like...
it feels like... [comments] => 4 [counter] => 191 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Daniel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Lost

Contributed by Daniel on Friday, 9th August 2002 @ 12:27:16 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



take a look inside my world, i don't know what's the matter with me
can't you see my reality is that what i don't want it to be
every anomaly on top of me keeps coming up from my past
just as i run into the present now i hope it doesn't last
i need to speak, can't talk the words
i have a move, can't walk this nerve
i want to think, can't seem to learn
and when i blink, the scene has changed
i'm losing everything...
so when i think i'm coming in...
walking inside my home and i don't know
where in the world i have been

this is the superstition i never thought i'd believe
brand new notion that nothing will be alright
feels like something is keeping me holding me back
like a chain to my mouth that threw me off track

i read the book and i took a look on "your problems: how to solve them"
if it were up to me immediately i would like them to be forgotten
but i can't stop them here they come, no more today am i done
don't look at me like this is fun when i can't breathe under the sun
i need to rest, can't take some sleep
i have a crave, can't begin to eat
i want to look, can't seem to see
and when i blink, the scene has changed
i'm losing everything...
so when i think i'm coming in...
walking inside my room and finding soon
i don't know where i have been

this is the superstition i never thought i'd believe
brand new notion that nothing will be alright
feels like something is keeping me holding me back
like a chain to my mouth that threw me off track
this is the superstition you think i could recieve
ancient notion that nothing to me feels right
feels like something is keeping me holding me back
like a chain to my mouth that threw me off track

the day sets down
coming off a paranoia holding part of me
and i lay down
shutting eyes ignoring lies trying to hold me
this is the superstition...
a brand new motion...
it feels like...
it feels like...




Copyright © Daniel ... [ 2002-08-09 12:27:16]
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Re: Lost (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Friday, 9th August 2002 @ 01:18:00 PM AEST
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Ah...I see you finally finished it...good for you... I enjoyed it..
Jenni


Re: Lost (User Rating: 1 )
by ginsdance on Friday, 9th August 2002 @ 02:45:48 PM AEST
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I've felt like this before.... this reads like a song. Have you thought about putting it to music? Great write!
Ginsdance


Re: Lost (User Rating: 1 )
by Damon_Maynard on Saturday, 10th August 2002 @ 01:31:22 AM AEST
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I've been thinking about this a bit, and I have plenty of thoughts...but one solid one.

"it feels like..."

An ending, that is so far from an 'ending'...it's brilliant...you are gold!


Re: Lost (User Rating: 1 )
by Chrissie on Tuesday, 13th August 2002 @ 08:34:42 AM AEST
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You held me all the way with this Danny....I'm off for a second read ....
Chrissie xx




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