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Array ( [sid] => 20605 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Pure in Nature [time] => 2003-07-18 03:05:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] =>
Scent of star jasmine fills the air; my
mind stirs to full volume visions of
your splendor. Heaven falls as drops
of life-giving tears all around us
quenching thirsty forest ferns. The
wooded stage of our blending
surrounds our embrace. Holding
your heart to mine, no barriers save
the rain that drizzles down upon us. I
lift my eyes to stare spellbound into
the open windows of your soul.

The vision of you, wet with rain
pouring down through your hair,
and downward still to your skin,
pulls primal urges from the depths of
my soul. My eyes slip from your face
to follow my lips the distance of your
body to your belly. Rain sweetened
in its travel down your body fills my
mouth, but still my craving’s not
quenched. Delicate fingers of your
hand glide through my rain-slicked
hair to help guide my travel
down your features. Gasps of
pleasure deep escape your throat
as I find my destination. Sugared
nectar of your fruit pours over my
tongue to send kisses down my
throat, all together quenching my
thirst and igniting my desires.
Your knees collapse, weakened by
my touch, you slide softly into my
arms. Lips brush to share in each
other’s breath made heavy by tactile
cravings. Our passions swell to
match the might of the rivers roar.
Unstoppable insatiable hungers for
the touch of one another drive us in
and through the night. As fire our
bodies’ smolder in amber of morning
light. The light of two brought
together under The One.
Perfection. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 153 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Snakewriter [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Pure in Nature

Contributed by Snakewriter on Friday, 18th July 2003 @ 03:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Scent of star jasmine fills the air; my
mind stirs to full volume visions of
your splendor. Heaven falls as drops
of life-giving tears all around us
quenching thirsty forest ferns. The
wooded stage of our blending
surrounds our embrace. Holding
your heart to mine, no barriers save
the rain that drizzles down upon us. I
lift my eyes to stare spellbound into
the open windows of your soul.

The vision of you, wet with rain
pouring down through your hair,
and downward still to your skin,
pulls primal urges from the depths of
my soul. My eyes slip from your face
to follow my lips the distance of your
body to your belly. Rain sweetened
in its travel down your body fills my
mouth, but still my craving’s not
quenched. Delicate fingers of your
hand glide through my rain-slicked
hair to help guide my travel
down your features. Gasps of
pleasure deep escape your throat
as I find my destination. Sugared
nectar of your fruit pours over my
tongue to send kisses down my
throat, all together quenching my
thirst and igniting my desires.
Your knees collapse, weakened by
my touch, you slide softly into my
arms. Lips brush to share in each
other’s breath made heavy by tactile
cravings. Our passions swell to
match the might of the rivers roar.
Unstoppable insatiable hungers for
the touch of one another drive us in
and through the night. As fire our
bodies’ smolder in amber of morning
light. The light of two brought
together under The One.
Perfection.

Copyright Â© Snakewriter ... [ 2003-07-18 03:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Pure in Nature (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Friday, 18th July 2003 @ 07:16:59 AM AEST
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wonderful passionate write
Shari

Re: Pure in Nature (User Rating: 1 )
by 2timesX on Friday, 18th July 2003 @ 11:30:47 AM AEST
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goodness, this poem is so well written. lovely discription; i can picture it all. it makes me feel all tingley

Re: Pure in Nature (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Friday, 18th July 2003 @ 08:21:41 PM AEST
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Totally awesome write ... beautiful, exquisite ... Jan

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