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These scribblings I once thought made me whole

Every memory we had is now gone
Replaced by the love of another one

Her I'll keep close and she'll lead my way
These cherry lips will lure me to her each day

I'll never worry if she stays out late
She's never given me a reason to be in that state

So mark on someone else with your evil ink
Try not to see my face every time you blink

I've already forgotten why I thought you were so rare
You're a dime a dozen, only a nickel to share

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Your Tattoo has Faded

Contributed by eyesrustedshut on Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 10:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic: sarcasticpoetry

I've erased these marks you left on my soul
These scribblings I once thought made me whole

Every memory we had is now gone
Replaced by the love of another one

Her I'll keep close and she'll lead my way
These cherry lips will lure me to her each day

I'll never worry if she stays out late
She's never given me a reason to be in that state

So mark on someone else with your evil ink
Try not to see my face every time you blink

I've already forgotten why I thought you were so rare
You're a dime a dozen, only a nickel to share

Copyright © eyesrustedshut ... [ 2003-07-17 22:25:00]
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Re: Your Tattoo has Faded (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Friday, 18th July 2003 @ 06:50:33 PM AEST
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Interesting concept here... :)

Re: Your Tattoo has Faded (User Rating: 1 )
by tease_whizz on Friday, 18th July 2003 @ 07:35:06 PM AEST
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simple rhyme scheme and form but a very effective idea and way of expressing yourself. keep writing, Kate x

Re: Your Tattoo has Faded (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 09:04:06 AM AEST
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I related to this one, a good write
Shari

Re: Your Tattoo has Faded (User Rating: 1 )
by stargazer on Thursday, 24th July 2003 @ 11:28:30 AM AEST
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Defiantly a new approach but it drew me in. Such a simple rhyme scheme but made the poem all the better. Nicely done. -Amy

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