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Array ( [sid] => 20588 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => ZZZzzzzzzzzzz [time] => 2003-07-17 20:05:00 [hometext] => Half awake, half asleep [bodytext] => Too many things to do
when you
waking up to the
vacuuuuuuuuuuume
surrounding the nucleus
of your being
set aside the dreams
that only moments ago
were part of your being,
snort twice
turn arrrrrrroooooooound
you beast
you ungrateful,
you undevoted
thing to your past!
You angel...
you unresentful
you unregretable
you creature
of the time being you.
Who may I be
to pass judgement
but the echo
which strikes twice
and once again
and again..
till you turn
to the other side,
there... you see
you do not snort no more.
Wrapped as you are
with sorrow and solitude
well disguised
in pearls & rubies.
Busy.. buzzzzzy ...
always almost
carrying messages
of faith and glory
from times past
to times to come.
No more to say
not much to do
but snore again
as aging wings
armfuls of them
from me to you. [comments] => 7 [counter] => 287 [topic] => 14 [informant] => vincy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DreamsandWishes )

ZZZzzzzzzzzzz

Contributed by vincy on Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 08:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

Too many things to do
when you
waking up to the
vacuuuuuuuuuuume
surrounding the nucleus
of your being
set aside the dreams
that only moments ago
were part of your being,
snort twice
turn arrrrrrroooooooound
you beast
you ungrateful,
you undevoted
thing to your past!
You angel...
you unresentful
you unregretable
you creature
of the time being you.
Who may I be
to pass judgement
but the echo
which strikes twice
and once again
and again..
till you turn
to the other side,
there... you see
you do not snort no more.
Wrapped as you are
with sorrow and solitude
well disguised
in pearls & rubies.
Busy.. buzzzzzy ...
always almost
carrying messages
of faith and glory
from times past
to times to come.
No more to say
not much to do
but snore again
as aging wings
armfuls of them
from me to you.

Copyright Â© vincy ... [ 2003-07-17 20:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: ZZZzzzzzzzzzz (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 08:52:15 PM AEST
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interesting write
michelle

Re: ZZZzzzzzzzzzz (User Rating: 1 )
by krystal on Friday, 18th July 2003 @ 10:09:38 AM AEST
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vincy you have such a wonderfully interesting imagination... your poems leave me feeling so light hearted, with usually a smile... thank you for sharing the gift of your mind

Re: ZZZzzzzzzzzzz (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Friday, 18th July 2003 @ 07:54:32 PM AEST
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Vincy you sure do have a great way with words. I like your poems. Good work!
Saira

Re: ZZZzzzzzzzzzz (User Rating: 1 )
by norm on Friday, 18th July 2003 @ 08:24:15 PM AEST
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To try to understand what happened
I might be right or it's way too deep,
You were wakened by a vacume noise
and ultimately you went back to sleep.

Re: ZZZzzzzzzzzzz (User Rating: 1 )
by buchi on Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 09:00:48 PM AEST
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Words speak!!! Awesome...

Re: ZZZzzzzzzzzzz (User Rating: 1 )
by jono on Friday, 21st July 2006 @ 01:12:58 AM AEST
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I like the way you make a great poem out of something simple like sleeping
good poem best wishes

John

Re: ZZZzzzzzzzzzz (User Rating: 1 )
by Errious on Wednesday, 6th December 2006 @ 11:23:38 AM AEST
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Wow! a fantastic use of contrast.
Like it!

Tom

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