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Array ( [sid] => 20572 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Lonliness [time] => 2003-07-17 12:05:00 [hometext] => Group Writes are started in the forums, and once finished added here. Please feel free to join in, or contact the moderators for more information.

(The poem is set out with the contributing author's name above their contribution to this group write.) [bodytext] => Ilhar:

The stroke of midnight came
She sat watching the flame
Alone again just the cat and she
Would there ever be company

Each night she lit the candle hoping
this was her way of coping
With the emptiness that spanned
Since they said goodbye in the sand

Of the beach so far away
On that terrible stormy day
He promised to return to her soon
But that was long ago so many moons

Shelby:

The clock ticked off the minutes
Minutes turned to days
The candle wax still dripping
Lonely nights and endless days

Haunting memories of that day
Came back to her still
For now she is living heart sick
A void nothing can fill

Prudent:

Lost in the grey despair of nothingness,
She falls into an abyss of desire.
Her forlornness evokes the flood of tears,
Of loosing him, she so much fears.

Lovewriter:

As dreamy thoughts
Fill her mind
The one true love
She hopes to find

One honest man
To take her away
The search go one
Still to this Day

He is out there
Open and true
As you search
He's searching for you [comments] => 9 [counter] => 313 [topic] => 43 [informant] => YPDC_Group_Writes [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
Lonliness

Contributed by YPDC_Group_Writes on Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 12:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



Ilhar:

The stroke of midnight came
She sat watching the flame
Alone again just the cat and she
Would there ever be company

Each night she lit the candle hoping
this was her way of coping
With the emptiness that spanned
Since they said goodbye in the sand

Of the beach so far away
On that terrible stormy day
He promised to return to her soon
But that was long ago so many moons

Shelby:

The clock ticked off the minutes
Minutes turned to days
The candle wax still dripping
Lonely nights and endless days

Haunting memories of that day
Came back to her still
For now she is living heart sick
A void nothing can fill

Prudent:

Lost in the grey despair of nothingness,
She falls into an abyss of desire.
Her forlornness evokes the flood of tears,
Of loosing him, she so much fears.

Lovewriter:

As dreamy thoughts
Fill her mind
The one true love
She hopes to find

One honest man
To take her away
The search go one
Still to this Day

He is out there
Open and true
As you search
He's searching for you




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Re: Lonliness (User Rating: 1 )
by PoloRM on Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 12:18:35 PM AEST
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Great group write guys! and Ladies. =)


Re: Lonliness (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 12:21:39 PM AEST
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Terrific write, guys... loved this...
Jenni


Re: Lonliness (User Rating: 1 )
by Ronald on Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 12:27:12 PM AEST
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Great Contribution pals!


Re: Lonliness (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 02:23:33 PM AEST
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Oops! I see my old nick "Prudent" here :o|
Thanks for your kind remarks guys! :o)
Saira


Re: Lonliness (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 02:26:57 PM AEST
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and yes my congratulations to Ilhar, Shelby and Lovewriter. Great work friends!
Saira


Re: Lonliness (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 03:24:27 PM AEST
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great write!!! loved this:) hgs n' love nessa


Re: Lonliness (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 07:18:55 PM AEST
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Thank you, Shelby, Saira, Lovewriter it came out wonderful
Shari


Re: Lonliness (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 09:25:24 PM AEST
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Oh my gosh I forgot we did this!1LOL Whoops! It did turn out great from start to finish we work well together ey???
Michelle


Re: Lonliness (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Friday, 18th July 2003 @ 03:01:53 AM AEST
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A beautiful contribution of skilled writers..very lovely. I congratulate..Ilhar, Shelby, Prudent and Love writer.
venkat




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