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Array ( [sid] => 20571 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Give A Little [time] => 2003-07-17 11:35:00 [hometext] => For Dean. I need to learn to calm down. [bodytext] => I'm alone again
Till I don't know when
Lying in a bed I just can't sleep in without you
What am I supposed to do
When every **** minute feels like an hour
I'll look for a way to get through, I will scour

Well I'm sorry that by keeping you safe
I don't let you have any fun
I'm sorry that you mean something to me
And I'm sorry for what I'll do to get back at you
I'm sorry you made me cry again
I'm sorry I can't help the way I feel
I'm sorry you don't want to be with me tonight
I'm sorry you made me love you
And that I'm not who you thought I would be

You make me want to make this easier on you
Wanna throw it all away and say I'm through
By leaving you alone forever
Till I see you again wherever
But that wouldn't be fair to everyone
Who's never made me feel outdone
And believe me, I'll never put what this has become
Before who I've been since long before you've come

Last night you bled so tonight I'll bleed
And I don't care if you call that greed
You're not the only one who can do stupid things
At least I do it on purpose and it means something
Because what usually makes it go away
Just isn't helping at all today
I guess I don't know how to cope
I guess you'll have to give a little and hope [comments] => 9 [counter] => 206 [topic] => 6 [informant] => MoonlitAngel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
Give A Little

Contributed by MoonlitAngel on Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 11:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



I'm alone again
Till I don't know when
Lying in a bed I just can't sleep in without you
What am I supposed to do
When every **** minute feels like an hour
I'll look for a way to get through, I will scour

Well I'm sorry that by keeping you safe
I don't let you have any fun
I'm sorry that you mean something to me
And I'm sorry for what I'll do to get back at you
I'm sorry you made me cry again
I'm sorry I can't help the way I feel
I'm sorry you don't want to be with me tonight
I'm sorry you made me love you
And that I'm not who you thought I would be

You make me want to make this easier on you
Wanna throw it all away and say I'm through
By leaving you alone forever
Till I see you again wherever
But that wouldn't be fair to everyone
Who's never made me feel outdone
And believe me, I'll never put what this has become
Before who I've been since long before you've come

Last night you bled so tonight I'll bleed
And I don't care if you call that greed
You're not the only one who can do stupid things
At least I do it on purpose and it means something
Because what usually makes it go away
Just isn't helping at all today
I guess I don't know how to cope
I guess you'll have to give a little and hope




Copyright © MoonlitAngel ... [ 2003-07-17 11:35:00]
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Re: Give A Little (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 01:37:23 PM AEST
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Hmmm I guess you do, grrlfriend.... nice write..
Jenni


Re: Give A Little (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 02:36:04 PM AEST
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Great write!
Saira


Re: Give A Little (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 03:01:02 PM AEST
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nice poem...


Re: Give A Little (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 03:20:42 PM AEST
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awwww!! big hugs n' love to you, nessa x


Re: Give A Little (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 09:29:41 PM AEST
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well done
michelle


Re: Give A Little (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 09:44:21 PM AEST
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Awww..Hun..its a male what do you expect? three legged gits most of them...honestly *rolls eyes*

Lots Love 'n Hugs to ya

-Becca


Re: Give A Little (User Rating: 1 )
by LadyDama on Friday, 18th July 2003 @ 04:53:22 AM AEST
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this poem struck me on many levels... it's very aggressive and sad though too... and i feel the pain in the last stanza... keep writing it out... great one here... blessings... michele


Re: Give A Little (User Rating: 1 )
by yellow_sundragon on Friday, 18th July 2003 @ 06:52:52 PM AEST
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Dee, your hurt. Even Tammi says wow. If you ever need me.... you know. I don't even have to tell you.

This is beautiful, and never be sorry, never have regrets, cause they only fill you with doubts.

Jaime


Re: Give A Little (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Monday, 28th July 2003 @ 05:14:08 AM AEST
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I love this and it lets you know what youre feel




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