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Array ( [sid] => 20559 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => NO TITLE [time] => 2003-07-17 05:35:00 [hometext] => MY HUSBAND WROTE THIS TO ME..I HAVE BEEN DEPRESSED FOR A LONG TIME NOW.. TELL ME WHAT U THINK... [bodytext] => SHE SITZ ALONE IN HER ROOM
WHAT GOEZ THRU HER MIND I WONDER?
IN THE DARK NO SOUNDS TO BOTHER HER...
WHAT IS SHE THINKING ABOUT I WONDER?
MAYBE THIS IS WHAT IT FEELS LIKE FOR HER TO BE DEAD,I WONDER??
ALL I KNOW IS THAT I MISS HER,
AND NEED HER BECAUSE SHE IS
OUR LIFE AND THE ONE I CALL WIFE..
DOES SHE KNOW HOW MUCH WE LOVE HER,I WONDER???
DJ MARK 03/10/03 [comments] => 6 [counter] => 146 [topic] => 48 [informant] => babygirlal28 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 12 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

NO TITLE

Contributed by babygirlal28 on Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 05:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

SHE SITZ ALONE IN HER ROOM
WHAT GOEZ THRU HER MIND I WONDER?
IN THE DARK NO SOUNDS TO BOTHER HER...
WHAT IS SHE THINKING ABOUT I WONDER?
MAYBE THIS IS WHAT IT FEELS LIKE FOR HER TO BE DEAD,I WONDER??
ALL I KNOW IS THAT I MISS HER,
AND NEED HER BECAUSE SHE IS
OUR LIFE AND THE ONE I CALL WIFE..
DOES SHE KNOW HOW MUCH WE LOVE HER,I WONDER???
DJ MARK 03/10/03

Copyright © babygirlal28 ... [ 2003-07-17 05:35:00]
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Re: NO TITLE (User Rating: 1 )
by Nightingale on Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 09:12:02 AM AEST
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i think ur husband loves you. well, if he wrote u this poem, he must love u coz we normally write for those we care for. that's what i think. also, i think that he miss u coz u've been rather distant... well, that's what i could gather in this poem.

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by Sexygirl on Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 10:34:48 AM AEST
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How can you be so depressed with someone that expresses that they love you and miss you.....maybe you need someone to talk to .....yah he loves you....take care of yourself.......

Re: NO TITLE (User Rating: 1 )
by vincy on Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 10:41:01 AM AEST
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This poem shows there is genuine caring here,
I understand how depression causes withdrawal.
Worry contracts, meditation expands. You can overcome this situation without medication which is a last resort, you can shake it off, communicate with him.
Don't let it drag on and on, life is short and you're aware of your condition which you can overcome.
You're fortunate to have caring, loving family, although they don't always show it I can tell you're loved.

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by Kimmie_mac on Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 10:58:57 AM AEST
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This poem is great and it is apparent this guy loves you. I hope you get to feeling better. Depression is not an easy thing. No matter how much love you feel you sometimes can't stop depression. But you can break the cycle by forcing yourself to get out and do things even though you don't feel like it. I wish you the best. Kimmie_mac

Re: NO TITLE (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Friday, 15th August 2003 @ 12:35:22 AM AEST
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I can say you have a good husband. I can say he's worried about you.

Re: NO TITLE (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 05:45:38 PM AEST
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Your husband loves you! And he misses you. I think it is time you talk to him. This is only a suggestion ofcourse

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